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Veterans are great
They are my mate
Let's celebrate
them on this date

2007-11-11 10:36:02 · 3 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities Poetry

3 answers

As a veteran, let me say that as a poem, that wasn't too good, but as a sentiment it is very appreciated. Thank you for saying it, and I liked the rhyming. The rhythm left a lot to be desired, but it was also hard to get all our M-16's to create a pretty rhythm also. Peace and tranquility and thanks for the thought.

A Vietnam Vet.

2007-11-11 11:09:47 · answer #1 · answered by Dondi 7 · 1 0

!!! I wrote the exact same poem, word for word, line for line, not more than two hours ago!!!

Obviously since I wrote this poem, I think it is marvelous! It is perfect. It is sublime.

2007-11-11 14:13:22 · answer #2 · answered by TAP 6 · 1 0

huh?..uhmm...okay..it's ok...i think

2007-11-11 11:13:46 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0 1

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