What do you think of my poem?
Mom
You talk the negative talk.
You think that you have all of the answers.
You never think about some things that you say
because you easily to hurt my feelings.
You need to realize who I am,
I hope you will find out sooner than later.
You never hate me when you think I'm ugly and terrible.
You never hate me when you think I'm stupid and loser.
You never hate me when you think I never smiling.
You're very stubborn and insensitive.
All I need you who loves me and take care of me.
All I ask for your love because I miss our good times and us to be along.
2007-11-11 06:25:42 · 4 answers · asked by kclynn 4 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
i already said
its OK
but are you feeling neglected as you usually write from the heart
2007-11-11 06:33:14 · answer #1 · answered by ♫ღ♥Samantha B™ 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
It is very good! Make a song out of this and see where it goes!!
2007-11-11 06:35:32 · answer #2 · answered by Vagabond5879 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
nnnnnnniiiiiiiiicccccceeeeee you are a good poet
2007-11-11 06:36:27 · answer #3 · answered by magdaly 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
thats k8ida harsh. sorry :(
2007-11-11 06:33:27 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 2⤋