A dirge for a good fella
the heroic Rasta Tella
A perfect kind of poem
with a theme so solemn
A narrated pain of a poet
with eyes really wet.
None can explain better
than my pen through this letter
None can be extraordinarily explicit
than my pen's poetic wit.
A man with nine lives;
Another hero in our musical archives
A true sporting soldier
whose fame, you can't bar.
He accomplished his duty
And broght back the music's beauty
He revived our Glory
And our foes were full of fury
Now he's gone
like a bullet from a gun
But his name will forever be in gold,
a fact that needs not be told
A dirge for a good fella
The heroic Rasta Tella
He was a hero in Rap. He was like Benie man. but I decline to mention names here. Those who knew me know who I talk about. But i hope you appreciate the poem. Farewell to a fallen Colleague!
2007-11-11 06:07:06 · 6 answers · asked by Freeman 5 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
Tyler, I am not sure what you mean by in Memoriam....but you are not dead yet.
however I would be glad to write you a peom of my choice!
2007-11-11 09:05:23 · update #1
Penfold......maybe!!!
2007-11-11 09:06:18 · update #2
Very nice poem of a great friend i would assume.well i hope he;s in peace now as are you .very nice poem in deed.....May god be with you in your time of sorrow; for your friend; ,,I just lost a really special, friend also; and it;s almost unbearable....lots of luck to you Sir.
2007-11-11 15:09:14 · answer #1 · answered by Cami lives 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very good Freeman...would you if given the chance write my In Memoriam Poem?
2007-11-11 16:37:37 · answer #2 · answered by tyler durden Oƒƒicial 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Super poem. I like everything about it - the theme, chosen words, rhyme, what more can I say? A big gold star for you.
2007-11-11 14:36:50 · answer #3 · answered by Marguerite 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Well you got me beat. I'm guessing it ain't about Dean Martin.
2007-11-11 15:09:09 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
I do like it. It is a very good read.
It's epic...and chaotic.
2007-11-11 14:25:30 · answer #5 · answered by Lady Annabella-VInylist 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
pretty good :)
2007-11-11 14:23:05 · answer #6 · answered by sugarmydog 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋