grammar help?

Question

in this paragraph.. continued paragrap actually. ineed to add apostrophes where they are missing and delete or correct them where they have been missused . this is the paragraph:

Her officers reports on her were always good. Wounded twice, she outwitted the doctors' and returned to her unit undetected; but when she came down with the " the fevers," a doctor discovered the secret that until then had been her's alone. ( Many of the distinctions among different illnesses that produce fevers- from typhoid to influenza- were not yet known; if patients had a high fever and it's accompanying discomforts for very long, they were diagnosed as having " the fevers.") Its no surprise that when her secret was finally told, her superior officers wouldnt believe it. Dressed in women's clothes, she was escorted to separate quarters not by military police but by her superior officers. Many years later, at Paul Reveres' suggestion, she donned the uniform again and went on speaking tours' to raise..

Answer 1

Her officers reports on her were always good. Wounded twice.She outwitted the doctors' and returned to her unit undetected. But when she came down with the " the fevers," a doctor discovered the secret that until then had been her's alone. ( Many of the distinctions among different illnesses that produce fevers from typhoid to influenza were not yet known; if patients had a high fever and it's accompanying discomforts for very long, they were diagnosed as having " the fevers.") Its no surprise that when her secret was finally told, her superior officers wouldnt believe it. Dressed in women's clothes.She was escorted to separate quarters not by military police but by her superior officers. Many years later at Paul Reveres' suggestion, she donned the uniform again and went on speaking tours' to raise..

Answer 2

Her officers' reports on her were always good. Wounded twice, she outwitted the doctors and returned to her unit undetected; but when she came down with the " the fevers," a doctor discovered the secret that until then had been hers alone. ( Many of the distinctions among different illnesses that produce fevers- from typhoid to influenza- were not yet known; if patients had a high fever and its accompanying discomforts for very long, they were diagnosed as having " the fevers.") It's no surprise that when her secret was finally told, her superior officers wouldn't believe it. Dressed in women's clothes, she was escorted to separate quarters not by military police but by her superior officers. Many years later, at Paul Revere's suggestion, she donned the uniform again and went on speaking tours to raise..

This assumes that there were multiple officers submitting reports and not a single officer submitting multiple reports. The context would support either version.

Answer 3

Her officer's reports on her were always good. Wounded twice, she outwitted the doctors and returned to her unit undetected; but when she came down with "the fevers", a doctor discovered the secret that until then had been hers alone. (Many of the distinctions among different illnesses that produce fevers – from typhoid to influenza – were not yet known; if patients had a high fever and its accompanying discomforts for very long, they were diagnosed as having "the fevers".) It's no surprise that when her secret was finally told, her superior officers wouldn't believe it. Dressed in womens' clothes, she was escorted to separate quarters not by military police but by her superior officers. Many years later, at Paul Revere's suggestion, she donned the uniform again and went on speaking tours to raise...

Answer 4

It is a little difficult to do, because at first, we do not know if there was more than one officer or not. If so, it would be fine. If is was a single officer it would be officer's reports.

Besides all this, I think this is homework that I do not feel like doing.
EDIT: This is why I don't like doing homework for people. The one below me is wrong. It should be PAUL REVERE'S suggestion. His last name is Revere, so since it was his suggestion, you add an apostrophe s to the name.

Answer 5

the recent era of yankee childrens isn't being taught grammar as a route. the faculty equipment expects the little ones to %. it up themselves merely by technique of analyzing textbooks and listening in college. are you able to tell it turned right into a foul concept to take grammar classes out of the lecture room?

Answer 6

I thought you were going to tell a joke or riddle about your

"grammar and grandpar"