I continue to stalk you,
Though I don't understand why.
Perhaps it's because
Jeff Bridges is easy on the eye.
Maybe it's cause
Your sarcastic wit,
That brightens my day
Just a wee bit.
If you ever leave Answers,
I know I will cry,
Though I know it's because
You are off getting high.
When you return,
I'll sigh in relief.
Though I honestly wonder
If you have all your teef.
Since I've finished this poem
And I'm now burning like lava,
Will you come to Louisiana
And meet me for java?
OK, that's it. What do you all think?
2007-11-01 18:23:43 · 16 answers · asked by frenzy-CIB- Jim's with Jesus 4 in Society & Culture ➔ Religion & Spirituality
Yeah, the rhythm is off in a few places. I'll have to work on that...
2007-11-01 18:50:11 · update #1
Dude is ignoring me again..WHAAAAHHHHH!
2007-11-02 09:24:19 · update #2
I'm going to let this stay up for a while for people to see, but obviously The Dude is getting the 10 points.
lol, brother. Maybe I'd have had better luck if I'd done what you said.
For the critics...
The poem was meant to be humorous, not a classic work of literature...lol.
2007-11-02 12:24:46 · update #3
:) You're sweet. I've only been to Louisiana once -- for JazzFest. It was pretty sweet.
2007-11-02 10:44:38 · answer #1 · answered by STFU Dude 6 · 2⤊ 2⤋
False
2016-04-01 23:59:09 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Cute
2007-11-01 18:27:43 · answer #3 · answered by Melty Blood 3 · 1⤊ 3⤋
LOL I think the dude abides.
2007-11-01 18:36:51 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 3⤊ 0⤋
Geez... the last poem a woman wrote for me, everything rhymed with "muck". Come to think of it, I guess it wasn't really a poem either...
2007-11-01 18:36:47 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 5⤊ 1⤋
I'm glad I'm not "The Dude".
...even so, a stalker might be kind of fun....hmmm
2007-11-01 18:32:48 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
Wow, that one guy was really harsh. But yeah, it has its funny moments, but even more painful moments of just bad language and wordplay.
2007-11-01 18:31:38 · answer #7 · answered by damlovash 6 · 1⤊ 2⤋
...just HOW many glasses of that blackberry wine did you have, anyway? lol
yer soooooo silly-don't ever change!
2007-11-03 12:18:58 · answer #8 · answered by spike missing debra m 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Offer to take him bowling.
2007-11-01 18:35:05 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 4⤊ 0⤋
Careful,,, DUDE might show up.
2007-11-01 18:32:55 · answer #10 · answered by hamoh10 5 · 2⤊ 0⤋