Jen,
I will not be able to come to DC with you all ladies. It didn’t work out for me. I am sorry. However, thank you so much for your kind offering me $25 discount. Hope, I will be able to come other time.
Thank you again for yesterday. I can’t wait to see the pictures.
Lynn
2007-10-31 04:29:42 · 3 answers · asked by Lynn 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Other - Education
Jen,
I will not be able to come to DC with you all (OMIT ALL) ladies. It didn’t work out for me. I am sorry. However, thank you so much for your kind offer (STRIKE ING AND THE WORD ME. ADD OF THE) ing me $25 discount. Hope, I will be able to come (AN)other time.
Thank you again for yesterday. I can’t wait to see the pictures.
Lynn
Here is the corrected version:
Jen,
I will not be able to come to DC with you ladies. It didn’t work out for me. I am sorry. However, thank you so much for your kind offer of the $25 discount. (ADD I) Hope I will be able to come another time.
Thank you again for yesterday. I can’t wait to see the pictures.
Lynn
2007-10-31 04:37:45 · answer #1 · answered by thisbrit 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Jen,
I will not be able to come to DC with you all ladies. You all or you ladies.
It didn’t work out for me. I am sorry. However, thank you so much for your kind offering me $25 discount. so much for your kind offer of a $25 discount.
Hope, I will be able to come other time. Delete , after Hope.
Thank you again for yesterday. I can’t wait to see the pictures.
Lynn
2007-10-31 04:39:03 · answer #2 · answered by noname 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
I would word it like this:
Jen:
I will not be able to come to DC with you. It didn't work out for me. I am sorry. However, thank you for your kind offer of a $25 discount. I hope I will be able to come another time.
Thank you again for yesterday. I can't wait to see the pictures.
Lynn
2007-10-31 04:42:02 · answer #3 · answered by Softball Mom 4 · 2⤊ 0⤋