Ok, this is what I'm trying to say:
Thank you for coming and sharing your wonderful flute playing and motivational words with us. I enjoyed the energy and passion in your performances.
This is how I wrote it, but I'm not sure all my my Spanish is correct:
Gracias por venir y compartir su interpretación marvillosa de la flauta y sus palabras que motivan con nosotros. Gocé de la energía y pasión en sus interpretaciones.
How does it look?
2007-10-31 01:00:00 · 6 answers · asked by Anonymous in Society & Culture ➔ Languages
Haha, no I didn't use an online translator... my Spanish is just that bad...
2007-10-31 01:58:09 · update #1
original---Gracias por venir y compartir su interpretación marvillosa de la flauta y sus palabras que motivan con nosotros. Gocé de la energía y pasión en sus interpretaciones.
edit--------Gracias por venir y compartiendo tus maravillosos desempeños con la flauta y palabras motivadoras con nosotros. Gocé la energía y la pasión en sus desempeños.
2007-10-31 01:22:27 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 2⤋
Crazy is just crazy. No offense:
Original: Gracias por venir y compartir su interpretación marvillosa de la flauta y sus palabras que motivan con nosotros. Gocé de la energÃa y pasión en sus interpretaciones.
Correct:Gracias por venir y compartir su marvillosa interpretación de flauta y sus palabras motivadoras con nosotros. Gocé la energÃa y pasión en sus interpretaciones.
Overall really good you spanish is not that bad.
2007-10-31 09:32:32 · answer #2 · answered by chiquiz08 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
edit: Gracias por venir y compartir su maravillosa interpretación de flauta y sus palabras que nos motivan. Disfruté de la energÃa y pasión de sus interpretaciones.
;) i'm from Peru :)
2007-10-31 09:26:26 · answer #3 · answered by miliii 1 · 1⤊ 1⤋
"Thanks for to come and to share"?
Venir is TO come... you want "coming"... so it shoud be Veniendo and Compartir bothers me... that is a contraction... "Com" (with) "Partir" to share.. I would think Partir would be more correct and, since you said "sharING" that would be 'Pratiendo".
I also have some other problems with your grammer, but mostly, it's OK.
Perhaps someone that knows formal Spanish better than I do (which wouldn't be difficult) can clear this up.
It's a nice sentiment... hope we can get this worked out for you
2007-10-31 08:19:30 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 2⤋
You should ignore the second answerer's remarks. It appears that he/she is the one who is trying to transliterate too literally. You have used the infinitives correctly. I like the answer right above mine.
2007-11-02 02:30:29 · answer #5 · answered by drshorty 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It looks good to me! : )
2007-10-31 08:04:49 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋