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2007-10-30 19:16:50 · 16 answers · asked by Anonymous in Society & Culture ➔ Mythology & Folklore
I agree with Silly. Rest is only for us weary dream-chasers.
But I’m glad to know that "emptiness" is composed of beauty and undiscovered mystery.
Wonders and wonders… :-)
2007-10-31 06:16:57 · answer #1 · answered by Ms Informed 6 · 5⤊ 0⤋
I like it and it is really interesting. I want to give you some feedback and corrections though. It is really easy to confuse the present and past tense and mix them up in a story. In general you do it very well and I see how when you talk about the past, you use past tense. In that first paragraph you say, 'I remembered the last time...' Actually, you should change that to the present tense because you aren't yet talking about the past. Just simply change it to 'I remember the last time...' and you'll be all set there. Same thing with the next sentence. Instead of 'I smiled at the memory' say 'I smile at the memory'. Those two things are really small errors and are easily cleared up but make sure that your tense agrees. It may be a small element but it is an important one to remember. Just a quick note on your second paragraph, 'peacefull' should actually be 'peaceful'. To catch these minor spelling mistakes use the spell check on Word. If you aren't using Word there are lots of websites on the internet that will do a spell check for you. In your third paragraph you want to make sure that punctuation goes inside the quotes not outside. Also you have 'She joined me on a swing' you may want to make that 'She joined me on the swing'. In your last paragraph you really don't need that last sentence. There is no need to say that she is an angel because your description of her tells the reader that she is an angel. Overall I think this story is very good and you should keep writing. Just keep in mind those little things I pointed out.
2016-04-11 04:37:55 · answer #2 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
My angels sleep on their bed in my house...only to turn into monsters during the day. I am fooled by their innocent faces every night, night after night. Yes, I am talking about my sons who are my life....
Regarding life in other galaxies, my religion supports that. Let science confirm it for its own satisfaction...
2007-10-30 20:16:01 · answer #3 · answered by P'quaint! 7 · 3⤊ 0⤋
I have no idea if angels do sleep wherever they are because i believe they are awake to watch over us.
2007-10-31 00:33:16 · answer #4 · answered by brainwhacker 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I don't believe that angels need sleep but I do think that Jesus Christ was a supernova...
2007-10-31 13:33:30 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
I once had an angel in the back seat of my '64 Galaxie...
2007-10-30 20:06:23 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 6⤊ 0⤋
angels dont sleep,silly, the dance through the galaxies,they stay awake to help you, sometimes they daydream,mostly, though, they float around us,thats why we all have auoras
2007-10-30 22:50:54 · answer #7 · answered by wishalot101 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Awesome.
2007-10-30 20:11:32 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
They never rest. Their energies are boundless, as is their power. They are agents of God for eternity.
2007-10-30 22:25:22 · answer #9 · answered by gone 6 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Not all of em, just Vladimir Guerrero.
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2007-10-30 20:07:36 · answer #10 · answered by Brandon's been a dirty Hore 5 · 3⤊ 0⤋