You Can't Tell.....
You can't tell,
To me it doesn’t matter
if you're leaving here today
I told you,
You were about to shatter,
everything that was going great
But, you said "Oh,
I would never do you,
do you and break your heart"
Oh, somehow,
All along I had the feeling
you had lied from the very start
(chorus)
You can't tell me that you ever loved me
You can't tell me that you really cared
It surprises me,
just how long I could take it,
Your games being so unfair,
And you couldn’t tell,
that the love was no longer there
You can't tell,
To me it's so repulsive
you always being gone
I told you,
You need to spend some time
Cause you're not the only one
You said "Hey,
I'm not the only parent,
you had a part in this too"
What the hell, gave you any rights
to treat us the way that you do?
(chorus)
You can't tell me that you ever loved us
You can't tell us that you really cared
It surprises me,
just how long we could take it,
2007-10-30 06:31:11 · 6 answers · asked by ? 3 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
Your games being so unfair,
And you couldn’t tell,
that the love was no longer there
(extension)
You bad talked us
You let us down
You walked on us
You ran around
You've stole and lied
Your words profound
And I'm here to tell you
That you've done it
for the last time
2007-10-30 06:31:36 · update #1
It was a little all over the place, but I really like the words and believe that you can go somewhere with it!
2007-10-30 09:15:10 · answer #1 · answered by Lee-Lee F 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
How ironic that you would post this today of all days. I was looking for an answer as I just recieved a phone call that the woman who gave birth to me died. I was not quite sure what to feel or how I felt. Your magical way with words describes so acuratelly the way she treated my Dad and the three kids.
Thank You so much Shad.
2007-10-30 17:45:11 · answer #2 · answered by loretta 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I liked what you said, but it was a tad difficult to read. I gather it to be a song, but I just couldn't get a tune to work for me. Still, I like the words.
2007-10-30 14:29:48 · answer #3 · answered by Dondi 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Worst relationship? yes . one was definitely ugly. am smarting still!!
Hey this could make a perfect refrain:
"Hey,
I'm not the only parent,
you had a part in this too"
good luck
2007-11-04 08:18:32 · answer #4 · answered by ari-pup 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
very gracious
i think a good song to relate too
''song sung blue''....neil diamond
cuz the words are blue and sad..
2007-10-30 15:28:57 · answer #5 · answered by ? 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
u reminded m of wat i had longed 2 4get!
2007-10-31 07:38:21 · answer #6 · answered by aditi 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋