tell me what u think and feel as u read this. and for those of u who want to know who this is about, its about me and yes i am young, 12 years old to be exact.
instead of crying,
i will be dying.
the smile on my face will be gone,
and everything else will be shown.
for some, life's too short to see,
but it is too long for me.
let this horrid life end,
there's no need to pretend.
why does life have to be so cruel,
there's no limit, no rule.
people say i am possessed and i can't break free,
but i do not agree.
2007-10-29 15:46:56 · 19 answers · asked by Anonymous in Society & Culture ➔ Religion & Spirituality
gosh, i cant express my love to all of u!!! i would hug all of u and weep out my tears till my love was expressed to u guys!!!
2007-10-29 15:55:46 · update #1
hey guys i was tryin to send mail to all of u but i cant cos i have to finish working, sorry.
2007-10-29 16:13:23 · update #2
Beautiful poem. But Why all the negativity?(Just curious)
2007-10-29 15:56:20 · answer #1 · answered by master J 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Why would a 12 year old feel this way? What in your life has made you feel this way? Are you being physically or sexually abused?,....are your parents in the middle of a divorce,...it prompts quite a few questions. The world is a rough place, but God wants us to lean on Him to make it through. When you do that, you will find that it really is not too bad! Do you have any friends that attend church nearby? If it is a Christian church that teaches from the bible, I recommend that you visit their youth group. You will meet people there that will be able to help you and encourage you. I will keep you in my prayers. Please keep the questions coming. Thanks!
2007-10-29 22:57:36 · answer #2 · answered by gabigsis 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Your poem definitely conveys the sadness..
I remember going through a similar phase in my teens - there were reasons behind it, how about you..
Are there things going on that are causing you to feel this way? If so, is there anyone that you can confide in?
Sometimes just writing about it helps - It did for me.
Things are not as bad as they seem at 12 years old - but please seek some counseling if you continue to feel this way..
Do you have poems with other themes??
2007-10-30 00:45:31 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
instead of crying and dying
you should be about living
God is always there
loving and forgiving
life can be cruel and short
seems the pain will never cease
but with Jesus Christ
you can have joy and peace
you're really too young
to be so pessimistic
give yourself a chance
your gifts are artistic
write about the world
how good it could be
make people laugh
make children happy
never give up
let your heart express
that God only believes
in your success
2007-10-29 23:09:09 · answer #4 · answered by ignoramus_the_great 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
instead of dying
its you that would be lying
its not meant to be
give it time you will see
when things seem out of place
with time this will erase
sadness does lead to joy
for every girl and boy
life can be good
give it a try, you should
put on a happy face
and you will find that free place
it amazes me a 12 year old can write of such pain,
do you need to talk about it
theres always hope
i will pray for you
god loves you
2007-10-29 22:58:39 · answer #5 · answered by lil ole me 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Wow, you definitely don't sound happy. That's a great poem though, especially for a 12 year old. I was very depressed when I was your age too. Hang in there.
2007-10-29 22:53:48 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Well it's clear that you have a talent. It would be a shame to let it go to waste.
I'm not sure what country you are in. If you are in Australia, give this number a call. 1800 55 1800.
You talk to them anonymously. In other words you don't have to tell them who you are. They can give you some advice, or perhaps just listen.
Otherwise go to this website. It's a great website. Very supportive. http://www.kidshelpphone.ca/en/home.asp
Don't forget - you're talented!! Don't let it go to waste!!
2007-10-29 23:04:01 · answer #7 · answered by B. Wild 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That is very heart-felt. You put it together very well. It sounds like you are experiencing some teenage emotions kinda early. Most teens and pre-teens have strong emotional feelings but they will pass as you age a bit. Its a rough time to go through. I wish you well.
2007-10-29 22:53:14 · answer #8 · answered by ? 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
If this is how you are feeling, instead of reaching out to strangers on the internet, you should really go and speak to a person, either a counsellor, a teacher, any adult friend you can trust, and especially your parents.
Please, please, seek help.
I almost lost my only baby to depression. Thank goodness, she came to me and her father. We got her the help she needed, and continue to do so.
2007-10-29 22:55:45 · answer #9 · answered by Sapere Aude 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I feel as though you are hurting deeply inside and I can't do anything about it.
You really have a way of communicating your thoughts and feelings through poetry.
I'll be praying for you because no one deserves to be that sad.
2007-10-30 10:03:26 · answer #10 · answered by Bought*With*A*Price 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋