one day i'll die,
i'll be happy when im gone.
nobody cares, so no one shall cry,
i'll be in my grave all alone.
my life has ended,
just throw me in.
my life has descended,
oh, God please forgive my sin.
i have commited suicide
even though i said i wouldn't.
i have lied,
i couldn't bear it i couldn't.
what do u feel as u read?
2007-10-29 15:16:33 · 16 answers · asked by Anonymous in Society & Culture ➔ Religion & Spirituality
u guys are so sweet!!! i love u all too. nd yes i am young, 12 to be exact. i wrote this poem.
2007-10-29 15:22:17 · update #1
I think you are one depressed girl...
People care
You're just not aware!
2007-10-29 15:21:47 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
umm... first of all, I hope you're not thinking of committing suicide. I have a friend that thinks so low of herself that she talks about doing it sometimes. Just try to think of every amazing thing in your life. Confide in a journal or a really close friend. Believe me, it helps! And of course someone cares. There's always someone in everyone's life who cares about them. If no one you know, then me. I care.
When I red this, I feel sad for two reasons. One, because it's obviously an unhappy topic. Two, because this person obviously thinks she's going to hell for taking her life. That's rediculous. If God is all forgiving, He/She would forgive.
2007-10-29 22:29:34 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Um....I think u need some help, please tell me you didn't write it? It's really good,even thouhg it makes the person who wrote it sound like an emo, that's what it's supposed to be like. You should name it something like :
" Looking Through the Eyes of Depression"
Or something like that, I would keep it, but not read it to yourself very often, because who knows if you beat it in to your brain if you could start ot feel that way.
Your Little Penguin Friend
2007-10-29 22:22:13 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Is this a poem about you personally or are you putting yourself in someone else's shoes?
Either way I feel really sorry for the author.
It's a pretty good poem though.
2007-10-29 22:20:10 · answer #4 · answered by Bought*With*A*Price 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
After reading the first paragraph I was afraid it was going to be about suicide. It made me feel sad, and made me wish I could just reach out and hold this person until they cried it out and could cry no more--this person needs to know that someone does care.....
2007-10-29 22:21:47 · answer #5 · answered by Bonbon29 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I feel very sad for you. I think you are having a rough time in life right now. You are young, I promise it will get better. Don't give up.
2007-10-29 22:20:52 · answer #6 · answered by MOL 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
i feel this is a sad poem but i love it i think its really good. Not everything has to be bright and cheerful all the time.
2007-10-29 22:20:24 · answer #7 · answered by jindalove4 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
You need to reach out and take God's Hand. He is always there waiting and is always there when you come to the end of your rope. Don't let go!
2007-10-29 22:21:24 · answer #8 · answered by George 4 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Deep depression. You need to know the deep, deep love of Jesus!
2007-10-29 22:23:06 · answer #9 · answered by Horton Heard You! 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Ok here's the deal life gets better and if it sucks because i know it sucks f*** it because its going to get better but only if you try to make it better....
2007-10-29 22:23:06 · answer #10 · answered by moviechick2008 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋