Poem called Not a game. feel free to give rating outta 10?

Question

Butterflies in my stomach tells me that i love him.
This feeling is so intense it leaves me with a burning passion, a yearning of my soul for romance and desire, embracing with my love near a warm fire.
Right now it only seems to be a dream, as i sit alone here with an aura full of gleam.
Guiding me to the next step to write this poem to release my thoughts so my soul can beem. this is no joke or game for me strange as it may seem!

Answer 1

pretty good frau, there is a lot of passion in you.i'd give it a 7
well done keep it up