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It’s not all academics: Penn’s well-roundedness helps students like me who want a little bit of everything.

2007-10-27 14:29:45 · 6 answers · asked by 2 days after my B day :) 2 in Education & Reference Words & Wordplay

can u explain how it's incorrect???

2007-10-27 14:33:54 · update #1

6 answers

What i see is no
Explained

With a linking verb, the singular subject It's usually takes a singular object, not the plural object academics.
meaning you need to remove the s in academics.

2007-10-27 14:38:41 · answer #1 · answered by Elegwa 3 · 0 0

Happy belated Bday!

The phrasing is a bit awkward. I'd say something more like:

My interest in attending Penn (State?) is not only for the academia: the well-rounded curriculum is very appealing to a student like me, since I enjoy learning about many different subjects outside of my declared major.

It is kind of awkward as one entire sentence. I would try writing what you want to say in two sentences rather than just one.

2007-10-27 21:48:20 · answer #2 · answered by Serena 7 · 1 0

Yes. I'm not sure what sentence the other posters are reading.

2007-10-27 21:34:08 · answer #3 · answered by Doc Occam 7 · 0 0

I think it's fine except instead of this : it should be ;

2007-10-27 21:38:01 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

nope

2007-10-27 21:32:20 · answer #5 · answered by ME 2 · 0 0

NO

2007-10-27 21:32:44 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

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