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here is another one: what more is ther to life?
life is one big chance
taking a risk...
i fall in love
could this be my last romance?

what is the chances...?
that you are the one,
that we'll last together,
that we will meet heart,soul and body,
that this could be loves last dance?

have we found love...?
only me and him could know
reconizing that special bond between us
my heart beats faster...
a push,a shove against my chest

if not love we are friends
if we don't work we'll still talk
we will make amends

but for now we have the thoughts...
of being together or
till the next time we chat...
in the end i hope its true love we got.

well i hope this is better than my others.

2007-10-25 03:39:57 · 7 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships Singles & Dating

if you actually read this could you please answer...i like all feedback.negative or positive.thx

2007-10-25 04:15:40 · update #1

7 answers

She wrote this for me so everyone take a step back. ;D

2007-10-25 04:55:51 · answer #1 · answered by treeofwisdom7 3 · 0 0

Well, it seems to me that you have the thoughts of love down! The thought of being friends if it doesn't work is kind of a problem. Most times after a relationship it is too hard for two people to be friends. There is something about that attachment between the two of them. Too much confusion!

2007-10-25 17:36:49 · answer #2 · answered by luckyman 3 · 0 0

Very good, and the guy you wrote this for is a very lucky man and I'm sure he feels the same way

2007-10-25 11:26:10 · answer #3 · answered by BILL 7 · 0 0

This one is good! have you ever tried www.paintedperfectly.com? It's a great way to put some of your stuff out there for other people to read and comment!

2007-10-25 10:43:49 · answer #4 · answered by ~Just_Jessica~ 3 · 0 0

OMG if you wrote that for me, i would melt in your arms!
it's so romantic...

2007-10-25 10:43:30 · answer #5 · answered by Chelsea L 2 · 0 0

Oh no not another one .

2007-10-25 15:42:33 · answer #6 · answered by tony s 5 · 1 0

BRUFF!

2007-10-25 10:43:34 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

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