this is another poem of mine: i thought all there was,
was lies and deciet
for thats all i was told
so i have lived wishing to die
i have been beaten,
by my exes and my mom,
i have been scarred by those i trusted
and yet i remain calm
my pain has gone
all i feel is pity and sorrow
unlike everyone else...
i can't move on
when i find someone
my heart gets crushed
we've talked,we've shared
and it was fun
but i don't want to live with only lust
so i take the plunge
with it my heart falls
forward i fall,
faster into a lunge
till i'm walking alone again...
down an empty hall
well thats it so i hope you like it as much as i like writing them.leave me comments.
2007-10-25 01:58:39 · 10 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
this is not solely about me...its not even about me so don't worry about me.i just want answers to the stuff i write about.
2007-10-25 02:09:18 · update #1
Hey, I have read a few of your poems and I think they are really nice. They seem sad but I like your style. You have a natural creativity towards writing. So keep up the good work!
2007-10-25 04:54:02 · answer #1 · answered by treeofwisdom7 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
yep you could name it:
"I found my place in life"
or
"I am a victim not a victor"
you could try
"Looser Anthology"
or maybeee
"WAAAAA"
Good luck I guess the world need ditch diggers and victims too
just remember that you should have that poem in your pocket when you jump off a bridge, It will save the taxpayers from picking up all that therapy you cant afford
In response to added Information:
Any one that can think up that crap is about 1 Prozac away from cutting off their ear and mailing it to their Boy/girl friend. I recommend a rusty knife or a chain saw.
2007-10-25 09:05:08 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
A life is like that type of writing it is very common and lacks spontaneity or that lets read some more from this writer desire~~
2007-10-25 09:02:44 · answer #3 · answered by burning brightly 7 · 1⤊ 1⤋
I like it , because you are a very talented girl. Some of the dark stuff is a little much for me.
2007-10-25 10:20:21 · answer #4 · answered by BILL 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
pretty good but try writying more happy poems it will cheer you up and everyone who reads them...not bad not bad at all keep up the good work .you will get a better reaction if you make people smile!!!
2007-10-25 09:05:00 · answer #5 · answered by knobulation 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
painfull, i sure hope you aren't referring to yourself. It is a quality poem. plz get some help from someone you trust if you are.
2007-10-25 09:03:36 · answer #6 · answered by bumblemancan 2 · 1⤊ 1⤋
Not bad....Stay strong...there's always someone worse off than you are, remember that
2007-10-25 09:02:11 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
Wow...um...it's pretty good I guess. Very depressing though.
2007-10-25 09:02:19 · answer #8 · answered by Jess 6 · 1⤊ 1⤋
depressing and sad
2007-10-25 09:01:37 · answer #9 · answered by bigmommy240 3 · 0⤊ 2⤋
omg, that was wonderful... send me some of your poems steph72693@yahoo.com... thanks
2007-10-25 09:02:28 · answer #10 · answered by stephanie 2 · 1⤊ 1⤋