Wow I love reading and writing poetry
And i must say I very much loved it!
I understood every word
It made alot of sense, Its reality
It sends my brain on a thinking journey
and I love how it managed to keep a steady rhyme.
If you wrote this I am impressed if you didn't -Thanks for sharing.
Star for you!
:)
2007-10-21 20:40:15
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answered by Wicked Aliens 6
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you have clearly pinpointed the contradictions of being called a christian nation for the most part and being at war (plus all the wars throughout history done in the name of God) but remember that in the last days, there will be wars and rumors of wars. right now there is talk of ww3. remember also that if God is truly a part of a person's life, they will endeavor to love their enemies, no matter how hard it seems. nobody really wants to be at war (unless of course they have played one too many video games and they are de-sensitized to it). it just makes me want to be ready to meet him.
2007-10-22 03:35:05
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answered by christy 4
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Well, it has inspired me to write this...
When the last leaf is blown
From my life's tree
Will the wind be accused
Of killing me?
(actually, I wrote this many years ago.)
2007-10-22 03:25:46
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answered by Anonymous
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empty
like you must be feeling
I like this prose better, my friend --
If ye shall ask any thing in my name, I will do it.
If ye love me, keep my commandments.
And I will pray the Father, and he shall give you another Comforter, that he may abide with you for ever;
Even the Spirit of truth; whom the world cannot receive, because it seeth him not, neither knoweth him: but ye know him; for he dwelleth with you, and shall be in you.
John 14: 14-17
2007-10-22 03:30:17
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answered by mgs4Real 3
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I"m not a one for poetry in any form
2007-10-22 03:32:58
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answered by Anonymous
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all the other gods are fakes
2007-10-22 03:33:48
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answered by my ki 4
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Not bad... Makes you think. And it rhymes too! :)
2007-10-22 03:25:58
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answered by Belzetot 5
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I'm lost, makes no sense to me
2007-10-22 03:28:30
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answered by Anonymous
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