This is the car salesman section of my resume, I need it to sound realy good.. feel free to add to it.. thanks
I build strong customer relationships; I have exemplary organizational and customer follow-up skills, as well as networking to generate new leads and customers. I have great selling skills, awsome people skills and, have a strong drive to succseed
2007-10-19 05:32:32 · 2 answers · asked by Joey B 1 in Business & Finance ➔ Advertising & Marketing ➔ Other - Advertising & Marketing
I am able to build strong customer relationships. I have good organizational and customer follow-up skills and can use networking to generate new leads. I have good selling skills, people skills and have a strong drive to suceed.
As you can see, I "toned down" the adjectives such as "awesome" and "exemplary" to make it more believable. Also, be very careful with your spelling!
2007-10-19 05:44:53 · answer #1 · answered by missingora 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its good...last word is spelled like this...succeed
after the word "relationships" use a period.
last sentence the comma comes after the word skills Before the word "and"
2007-10-19 12:59:51 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋