do you think this make sense?
waking up to the nasty smell of dirty rubbish, the irritating road workers trying to extend the narrow roads and the deafening cars beeping their car trying to get out of the traffic to get to work was definitely frustrating.
if it doesn't make sense please tell me where it went wrong and i'll correct it.
thanks
2007-10-18 05:35:53 · 12 answers · asked by Anonymous in Cars & Transportation ➔ Commuting
Poor you. Sounds like waking up at yours is a nightmare! "beeping their horns, trying to get" that little section needs to read like that, forget the word car. Replace with horns and add a commer.
2007-10-18 05:57:33 · answer #1 · answered by Sea Horse 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yes
2007-10-18 06:32:15 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
The only problem I can see is the repetition of 'cars beeping their car' was it meant to be 'cars beeping their horns'?
If it was then it seems fine to me!
2007-10-18 06:56:21 · answer #3 · answered by eljay 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Well, your the one along with others that have the same problem. We "humans" tend" to get mad over things we have no control over=)...Is it wrong? It depends whether it is affecting your life in a bad or good way... I guess=)
2007-10-18 05:45:48 · answer #4 · answered by Unbreakable Me 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
sorry I don't mean to be affencive but it sounds like someone wakin up as a tramp livin on the street on top of rubbish bags on a busy street
SOZ!
2007-10-18 05:41:52 · answer #5 · answered by Azee_23 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It should read "beeping their horns" then a comma. Other than that it is ok.
2007-10-18 05:51:54 · answer #6 · answered by JP32 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Move to a different bus shelter
2007-10-18 06:22:55 · answer #7 · answered by Scouse 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
"beeping their car horns"
2007-10-18 05:45:25 · answer #8 · answered by just-dave 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It might make sense if you could spell properly.
2007-10-20 06:08:53 · answer #9 · answered by Very happily married. 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
More punctuation needed.
2007-10-18 05:44:16 · answer #10 · answered by SeabourneFerriesLtd 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋