In addition, I have digital video editing and Web producing experience, which will benefit the publication as newsrooms continue to embrace multimedia journalism.
2007-10-14 02:57:45 · 4 answers · asked by min 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Other - Education
I don't like starting "In addition", re-read your letter and consider if you really need to have it. I would reword it into two separate sentences such as:
"I have experience with digital-video editing and web-production. This experience will be beneficial to the publication due to the ever expanding use of multimedia in journalism."
What you have up there is acceptable during common speech but in a potentially formal document its really just a run-on sentence. Sounds like you're applying for a position in a school newspaper of somekind, good-luck! hope you get it.
2007-10-14 03:15:06 · answer #1 · answered by Mr Cooper 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's a runon. Stop the sentence at "experience" and then say "This will benefit..."
2007-10-14 10:06:12 · answer #2 · answered by Cunning Linguist 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think so, if at all I understand and it makes sense. No compromise!
2007-10-14 10:13:07 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
looks good to me and I taught English.
2007-10-14 10:06:36 · answer #4 · answered by wendy_da_goodlil_witch 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋