It is half past ten but I’m still awake,
Reminiscing the past we once have shared.
We have always dream that we would last
But I guess it was a big mistake.
We have always been together
That we thought it would be forever
But faith opened my eyes to reality
That you and me together is just a fantasy.
I remember the day when we last met
You hold my hand and made me melt
You told me that you never want us to part
And promise me you’ll never depart.
I always live of what you have said,
And thinking about it makes me smile
You made me happy and contented
And everyone can see me glowing from a mile.
And now that you are gone
All that I can do is to mourn
Till such time that I can move on
And find someone who can love me more than you did.
2007-10-13 02:16:21 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
I would call it 'Silent Memory'... I think its really good!! Well done. I like the way you've rhymed it... its got a good rhythm to it. I hope that you're happy though. I find it always helps me feel better when I write about situations. Hope all is well!!
2007-10-13 02:21:24 · answer #1 · answered by ~(Tinker) Belle~ 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like your poem. I like the name suggested, Moving On. I also thought that, My First Crush or My First Love, might fit. Good work on the poem and for your start on moving on.
2007-10-13 23:45:37 · answer #2 · answered by Smartassawhip 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
OMG thats really really really good. i love it.
call it... "moving on" idk
idk whatto call it maybe "memories"
hmm idk
i love it though
good luck and god bless
2007-10-13 09:24:25 · answer #3 · answered by carol<3 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
call it so near yet so far hun
2007-10-13 11:20:07 · answer #4 · answered by glowing flair 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
as I reflect.....as I wait
2007-10-13 09:23:06 · answer #5 · answered by same1961_2000 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋