grammar check, please.?

Question

Action and equality of American values attract Korean people. Those two common things are what Koreans don't have. If Korens adapt the goodness of equality and action,they will have better or greater culture values. To attracting to foreign people by a culture value has benefits. If the equality and action attracts, it wil make people to hving an open mind about culture values. The people who is an immigrant or foreigner like me, sometimes having a different view of cultural value. Some of them are mght be not attracted. But, what the most important thing is how you accept the cultural values.

Answer 1

Action and equality of American values attract Korean people. Those two common things are what Koreans don't have. If "Koreans" adapt the goodness of equality and "willingness to" act, they will posses a greater culture value. Attracting foreigners by a culture value has many benefits. If the equality and the action attracts, then, people will start to have an open mind about that countries cultural values. However, an immigrant or foreigner like me, sometimes find it difficult to accept a cultural value, due to various reasons, But, the most important thing is too learn how to accept the cultural values of that culture.

Answer 2

Action and equality of american values attract Korean people because those two common things the Koreans don't have. if Koreans adapt goodness of quality and action, they will have better or greater cultural values. Attracting foreigners by culture value has benefits. If equality and action attracts, foreigners it will open up peoples mind on culture values. For immigrants like me, having a different cultural value can be difficult because some of them are not attractive. But, the most important thing is how cultural values are accepted.


I think you also need help with the content. What would the Koreans say about this? Im sure south Koreans enjoy equality because its an industrialized democratic country.

Answer 3

I think:

Action and equality are two American values which attract Korean people. These two common values, Koreans don't have. If Koreans adopt the goodess of equality and action, they will have better, or greater cultural values. To attract foreign people through a cultural value has benefits. If equaltiy, and action attracts, it will make people have a more open mind about cultural values. People who are immigrants, or foreigners, (like me), sometimes have a different view of cultural values. Some values might not be attractive. But, the most important thing is how you accept cultural values.

Answer 4

Action and equality of American values attract Korean people. These two common things are what Koreans don't have. If Koreans adapt the benefits of equality and action, they will have better or greater culture values. Attracting foreign people to a culture value has advantages. If the equality and action attracts, it will give people a more open mind about culture values. People who, like me, are immigrant or foreign, sometimes have a different view of cultural value. Some of them are might be not attracted. But, the most important thing is how you accept the cultural values.

Answer 5

fix korens to Koreans.

after the comma put a space.

To attracting to foreign people needs to be made to Attracting the foreign people by a culture has benefits.

actions not action and attract not attracts.

will not wil and take away to and have not hving.

The people who are immigrants not the people who is an immigrant.

sometimes have not not sometimes having.

take away are change mght to might.

write not be instead of be not.

Take away But, what and make the start of the sentence The most .

This is all the grammar corrections I have found (please rate me for best answer I layed it out all perfect for you)

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Answer 6

"Korens" needs to be spelled Koreans.
"To attracting to foreign people" Needs fixing.
"The people who is" The people who are
"sometimes having a different view of cultural value" Sometimes have a different view of cultural value.
"But, what the most important thing is how you accept the cultural values." But the most important thing is how you accept other cultural values.

That's all I could find, hope that helps :)

Answer 7

-to attracting is supposed to be to attract
-If the equality and action attracts:attract

-are mght :might( only without are)
-what the most important:but the most important
-to hving :have (only)

Answer 8

America is a mixture of older cultures and really has nothing original of its own as it is developed by immigrants of all continents!Carry on with your own value system!