(the sentences i'm ttalking about are the ones in quotation marks)
in language arts, we had to swtich essays with the person sitting next to us and now have to revise their paper. one revision i'd like to make are these 2 sentences " april 6, 2007 is a date that i will recall for an eternity. this was both the worst and best day of my life..."
is there a better way that this sentence could be written?
2007-10-11 13:39:32 · 3 answers · asked by ipodlady231 7 in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
thanks! = )
2007-10-11 13:47:48 · update #1
"One day I will recall for an eternity was that of April 6, 2007. This was both the best and worst day of my life..."
2007-10-11 13:45:07 · answer #1 · answered by S. Reign 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Here is how I would word it ..... April 6, 2007 was a day I'll never forget for it was the best day of my life and the worst as well.
2007-10-11 20:46:50 · answer #2 · answered by rotodogman 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I will never forget 6th April, 2007: it was both the best and the worst day of my life.
2007-10-12 07:15:52 · answer #3 · answered by greenhorn 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋