my art teacher told us to make a surrealism poem & basically surrelism is things that don't go together will go together if you understand.My friend who was suppose to be helping me has been missing school so i was really hoping if some1 can help me with this.if you can make a poem that is surreal using only the following words i would be so happy:the words can be used in any order and i can only use does words but i can use as many i,me,you,is,as,the you know small words like that but nothing else
hole uncommon
planets great
before prepare
lighting story
kali thrills
work atmosphire
youth burn
improved delightful
feautures inspired
shake
2007-10-10 17:07:34 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
it is a silly exercise: treat it with the cotempt it deserves.
separate out your verbs, then just make sentences around them using the words you have left.
uncommon planets hole great lighting (and so on)
if you want a short poem, use each word once only.
if you want a longer poem, ring the changes:
uncommon planets lighting great hole ...
2007-10-10 20:23:30 · answer #1 · answered by synopsis 7 · 1⤊ 1⤋
I stumble upon a surreal poem titled "Acre Lane: the long mile" its nice a friend made it, he contribute it to my site
2007-10-11 12:09:08 · answer #2 · answered by Jovan Jay V 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
leave as it is but restructure bottom-up from 'shake' to 'uncommon hole'.
correct the misspelling, 'feautures'
good luck
2007-10-11 09:58:08 · answer #3 · answered by ari-pup 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Leave it as is. That's pretty surrealist.
How many surrealists does it take to screw in a light-bulb?
"The Fish."
2007-10-11 00:53:58 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
... shake shake baby
shake it all night long
2007-10-11 02:14:38 · answer #5 · answered by voivod 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋