Heart's Letter
One longs to hear,
Words so dear.
Hoping, romance will come
Not just one, but quite a sum.
Takes every path every strait
Just to be rejected, this I hate!
Cupid's bow had struck
Yet I couldn't duck.
Strangely, I can't find
My lover. Which had been denied.
My heart rolls furciously day by day,
Yet I'll search for my lover and wait.
Till than my heart will reside, In a depression from, whom I hide.
2007-10-10 13:36:11 · 4 answers · asked by Evangelist 3 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
i wouldnt say depressed, but more of a poem longing for love. just because the heart cant find a way to its true love, doesnt mean it goes into depression. "true love will find a way" in which case your 'heart' is one in longing or searchin for its love that it knows it has but can not reach. up in all fairly well written poem, kudos. -cheers
2007-10-10 13:48:37 · answer #1 · answered by Buddy B 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Decent poem, what is the question?
2007-10-10 13:43:46 · answer #2 · answered by pitbull1969 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
wow that is an amazing poem
2007-10-10 13:55:22 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
its good it shows how your feeling to w/ expressive tones
2007-10-10 13:46:23 · answer #4 · answered by ஐKatஐ 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋