The constant abuse flowing throughout the veins
The memories that keep the pain
A life that was Shook and Shock by the braisen actions
The elders that watched
I swore never to let it happen again
i was wronge...
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does this convay emotion
2007-10-10 13:31:07 · 2 answers · asked by ஐKatஐ 3 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
Thanks for the spelling corrections ^_^
2007-10-10 13:49:03 · update #1
it convays an emotion of regret, and mabey sadness, if this wasnt what you are looking for as a reaction you might want to re-write it. but save this copy never throw anything away i think its great! (ps wrong is spelt without the 'e') -cheers!
2007-10-10 13:37:24 · answer #1 · answered by Buddy B 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Yes, I can feel the emotion. Been there and had that happen to me, never again.
braisen is spelled brazen
2007-10-10 20:42:45 · answer #2 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋