Special
You think you're great
You think you're special
You think you're the best
You wish.
I hope you realize you're not
I hope you understand you're normal
I hope you appreciate life as it is
I hope you realize no better then me.
Is this a good poem or is it to much of a cliche?
2007-10-10 13:01:26 · 27 answers · asked by Mary 5 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
I LOVE IT
its so true tho for some people
because they think there like all that and that they are so cool
2007-10-10 13:05:08 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
I agree with the person before, it's a bit repetitive. No one can really say what a good or bad poem is, but I think it needs to be revised and better words used.
And it is a bit cliché, yes.
2007-10-10 20:05:30 · answer #2 · answered by evanwhisper17 4 · 1⤊ 1⤋
In matters of the arts and self expression it is sometimes difficult to say something is good or bad. Perhaps it would be best to say "It's just not my style" If you like it, and you feel it expresses your thoughts. Good enough.
2007-10-10 20:07:35 · answer #3 · answered by dudeman 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Just fix the last line, other than that it rocks and makes me think of Avril Lavigne. You'd have to scream it and rock out with it to convey the power behind the words. If you just recite it then it might seem corny. Good work! Build on it and put some music to it.
2007-10-10 20:06:17 · answer #4 · answered by JungleJane 4 · 0⤊ 2⤋
Too many I hope's and You think's try lowering the number of those...but a good poem...try to make it rhyme though...then send it back here...
2007-10-10 20:04:42 · answer #5 · answered by *Going nowhere much too fast...* 2 · 1⤊ 1⤋
The first stanza has a nice beat to it, but other than that... there's not much good I can say about it. Great message, but to be honest (no offense), the writing sucks.
2007-10-10 21:54:31 · answer #6 · answered by Tricia 2 · 1⤊ 1⤋
so cliche. you have no structure. nor rhymes.... and no its not a cliche noone writes something like that. keep those thoughts in your head. if your gonna write a poem, write a poem. poem being the key word.
2007-10-10 20:06:19 · answer #7 · answered by montrealgirl108 3 · 1⤊ 1⤋
No offense but is this poem used to hurt someone???
Calm down and write about better poems ok??
2007-10-10 20:04:53 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
Might want to change the name to "Not Special". But the poem is nice. good use of paralell structure
2007-10-10 20:04:23 · answer #9 · answered by Abira 4 · 0⤊ 2⤋
It's okay.... I'm not a favorite of repetitiveness, but that's just me.
2007-10-10 20:13:42 · answer #10 · answered by pomeranianlvr 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋