Damn Laid Back gave me the word to write a poem about.
Internalized
Fences placed
Enclosing guests
Channel flocks
Minds unlocked
Frictions' ashes
Spoiled dances
Out of step
Out of haste
Trampled games
Sparks of shame
Led to the slaughter
Passion hotter
Fire burns
Never learn
Never turn
Away
Just obey
2007-10-10 02:14:45 · 12 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
Hi,
If it is lust and not love that keeps the flame burning ('passion hotter, fire burns, never learn) it can go two ways: eventually the flame will go out and turn to ashes ('Frictions' ashes) as there's nothing left OR, love will develop and grow and give the relationship something more substantial to build on.
Never say never. One day you WILL learn, you will know when to turn away; you won't 'just obey'.
Pollyanna
2007-10-10 03:53:52 · answer #1 · answered by pollyanna 6 · 2⤊ 0⤋
I like that, thanks.
Enclosed little man
Fear for real passions
Deceiving true love
Channel of illusions
Drinking his bear
His wife burns in the pity
Cold fireplace
Burning the dear
Obeying the decadence
Headache of shame
Getting slaughtered
The mind in flame
Hanging out with rage
Never learn
Despairing cries
Poor whys
2007-10-10 13:12:41 · answer #2 · answered by jbaudlet 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Obey you not
For who are you
To tell me what I'm 'sposed to do
Enclosed by what
Our mind's unlocked
Won't be controlled, this little flock
Ashes die
Dances end
While with our friends some time we spend
Play your games
If you must prove
The shady side that's part of you
You shame me once
We share the blame
But shame me twice
It's now my game
The gates now open
The fire's gone
Your controlled flock has wandered on
Maybe it's you who hasn't learned
Sometimes just turn away
For who are you to tell me
That I must obey
2007-10-11 08:05:05 · answer #3 · answered by mommymanic 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I used to get into funks like that yet I even have had to found out that it is not my junk it quite is bothering them. as long as I shop my area of the line sparkling; i won't worry approximately what human beings do to theirs. In different words, whilst confronted with judgmental or homophobic comments perhaps you are able to desire to instruct the guy approximately what makes you sense uncomfortable approximately what they are asserting. I even have purely found out to enable it roll off my returned, and force on with what i'm meant to do.
2016-12-18 03:37:18 · answer #4 · answered by laranjeira 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Deep as a well of darkness. Rise, though the light hurts your eyes...Blinding light shrivels you down, deeper until you find courage to pay the toll, the awful price of knowing that a part of your soul remains as a siren on the rocks to lure you back down. Here is Insanity!
2007-10-10 02:27:13 · answer #5 · answered by midnite rainbow 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
'Debauchery' is the first word that comes to mind on reading this. Pardon me if I misread! 'Minds unlocked' but still asked to obey and obeying? Only closed minds would follow....
2007-10-10 04:23:21 · answer #6 · answered by P'quaint! 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
This makes me think of the word "trapped" instead of "internalize". Perhaps they are the same in a way though....
2007-10-10 09:58:57 · answer #7 · answered by Praire Crone 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I really, really like this. I visualize being trapped in circumstances where I feel I just can't say no, feel I have no right to say no. No way to be me, no way to explore other options. You paint a lovely picture. You are talented with words. Thanks
2007-10-10 02:23:05 · answer #8 · answered by ? 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Someone in rebellion....against?
Why rebellion? I think of school children who are closed in by (too much) structure and no freedom to express any of themselves.
NOT ADHD.
2007-10-10 13:26:23 · answer #9 · answered by Candii JoJo is a groovy chick. 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i felt as though i was in a very dark place
but somehow the light came on
very good!
2007-10-10 02:47:11 · answer #10 · answered by lee 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋