LADIES a poem of Spring , a Rose?

Question

The Rose..................

What a site to see we say, but do we really know
what a Rose like she goes through , to spring that certain glow.
In the winter she hides way, so patiently she sleeps,
a wishing well of strength and love, but quietly she weeps.

Awaiting old man winter to melt, so she may gallantly reappear,

this lovely princess, her blossoms begin to stare,
at my heart that shines so bright,, oh ,, the glory that she brings,
stopping nature in it's tracks as the Bluebird spryly sings.

This song to me ,about your gaze, that sets my heart on fire,
to hold this Angel just one night,, would be my great desire.

I send this poem to my Rose,, oh how she is delight,
I want to hold you silk to skin,, and rock her through the night...

Yes my,the Rose,,,,,,,,,,,,,. xxxoxoxoxox :)

Answer 1

interesting image, this is:
Awaiting old man winter to melt, so she may gallantly reappear

nicely dressed little rose poem

Answer 2

I love how you are so discriptive. It feels real and your use of metaphor or imagery is really good. You always describe things with such passion which shows it comes from a special place. You are truely talented. Now im not hear just to say only good things because all though good you are im not an expert or anything so if you feel the need to look more into progressing you do that if you want. But from my perspective you are really good.

Answer 3

even with the undeniable fact that i would not say that became into super even though it became into an fairly trustworthy n stable attempt.. it became into an fairly heart touching poem specially with the aid of fact i admire roses as would nicely be seen from my demonstrate screen call :-) save up the stable artwork. all of the very ultimate.. tk cr.

Answer 4

that is very well written loved it keep on writing