Hi, I need the conclusion of my essay to be Stronger and more powerful. Here is what I came up with,(final draft) I'm putting the entire essay in just so its relevant but please let me know if you think its a strong conclusion!
Thanks:
Any general comments on the essay are also welcome :)
Essay Link: http://blog.360.yahoo.com/blog-fo0sQB04daVwBLXGYsa4
Its just my yahoo 360 blog that i just made because this has a character limit
2007-10-09
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