This is about the phantom in The Phantom of the Opera. What do you think of this poem?
The Phantom rules,
The opera stained,
With traces of his deeds.
He’s in despair,
His prison’s there,
That mask conceals his sorrows.
He’s in the darkness,
Having sharpness,
Challenging opponents.
He cannot take it,
Takes Christine,
Leading to his doom.
Disappearance prevails.
The Phantom is lost.
BUT HE STILL RULES.
2007-10-05 20:59:58 · 3 answers · asked by milky s 4 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
Love it, nice poem.
2007-10-05 21:04:48 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Better than the last effort I must admit, but you seem to hold back on emotion.
2007-10-06 07:35:50 · answer #2 · answered by kissaled 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Have another star, this time the rhythm and flow are good.
2007-10-06 10:19:11 · answer #3 · answered by Dondi 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋