What do you think of this poem?
The greatest movie of its kind
A better one no one can find
Back To The Future parts One, Two, Three
Time travel essentially is the key
Those who are not planning to watch this
Do not know just what they will miss
So fine, so grand, indescribably great
To watch this show it’s never too late
All the jokes, minor, yet funny things
The times when that clock actually rings
The café, schoolhouse, and town square
Perfect as can be, ever so rare
Back To The Future, the best movie of all
How can anyone not respond to this call
To relive the adventure time and time again
Behold the greatest movie, no loss, only gain
Letting viewers get joyful, thrillful days
With all kinds of means and humorous ways
Back To The Future, legendary films
King of the world, Lord of all realms
2007-10-05 20:58:24 · 7 answers · asked by milky s 4 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
A person who selects a name like mayang should not be making smartalec remarks.
Now, with that said, you did a pretty good job, but your meter rambles. Try a little rewording to get the rhythm consistent, and you will have a much better quality work. I'll give you a star.
2007-10-06 03:16:54 · answer #1 · answered by Dondi 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I think you should go back to bed , not the future.
2007-10-06 04:03:24 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
no, it is not ode to go back to the future, because we can't stop the time running. we should enjoy the time passing by
2007-10-06 04:06:44 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
pretty good..its my style of poem (funny, rhyming, not tottally deep and meditating)
2007-10-06 04:01:43 · answer #4 · answered by Nicholas K 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
thats very nice dear
2007-10-06 04:01:12 · answer #5 · answered by caz 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
banal
2007-10-06 04:01:35 · answer #6 · answered by The Silent Majority 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its fun
2007-10-06 04:00:40 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋