" The fading of human power as they age, leaves them powerless without any control in their lives. This is about how defendless and disarmed can a person be despite being strong once in their lives"
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2007-10-05 08:24:18 · 10 answers · asked by MJ 3 in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
Original: The fading of human power as they age, leaves them powerless without any control in their lives. This is about how defendless and disarmed can a person be despite being strong once in their lives.
Revision: People's strength and vitality fade as they age, leaving them feeling powerless, without control of their lives. Despite being strong in youth, they become disarmed and defenseless in old age.
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2007-10-05 08:33:35 · answer #1 · answered by Bruce 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
How about: The fading of power humans experience as they age leaves them powerless, without any control in their lives. Despite being strong once in their lives, this reduction produces feelings of being defenseless and disarmed of power.
2007-10-05 08:39:51 · answer #2 · answered by nootch 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The power of a human being fades with age leaving them with no control over their lives. Despite having once been strong, age leaves us defenseless and disarmed.
2007-10-05 08:33:15 · answer #3 · answered by Meridith 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
" The power of humans fades as they age, leaving them helpless without any control in their lives. This is about how defenseless and disarmed a person can be despite of how strong they once were in their lives."
2007-10-05 08:34:21 · answer #4 · answered by kdfranzel 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
" The fading of human power as they age, leaves them as prey to the younger generation. Without any control in their lives they are forgotten and walked on. This is about how weak and manipulated a person can be despite being strong once in their lives"
2007-10-05 08:31:53 · answer #5 · answered by kymeekat69 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The older the human and his mind ages, the more control and power are lost. This leads to understanding how someone so strong can become so unable to get a grip, or take control- no matter how mighty he may have once been.
hope this helpss!
2007-10-05 08:32:11 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Try this re-write:
Failing powers of older people leave them feeling powerless and without any control of their lives. Despite their former strength in mind and body, people find themselves unarmed and defenseless as they age.
Hope that helps. When writing anything "formal," you should avoid saying "here's what I'm going to write about." Just write. Good luck!!
2007-10-05 08:28:07 · answer #7 · answered by tracymoo 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Try this version:
"Physical strength declines, leaving people powerless in their old age. This describes how individuals can lose control of their lives, despite their former strength."
2007-10-05 08:56:10 · answer #8 · answered by Dear Carlos 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The strength of human youth dissipates with age. Their power, thought limitless, decreases until all control is lost as they grow older, creeping towards a lasting sleep in the grave.
2007-10-05 08:52:45 · answer #9 · answered by Goethe's Ghostwriter 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
the older you get ,the weaker you get.
2007-10-05 08:30:19 · answer #10 · answered by THE"IS" 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋