It is ten past five on the evening of the 7th October 2006. In central Moscow, Russian Journalist, Anna Politkovskaya, enters her apartment block. 5 minutes later she is dead.
Anna Politkovskaya was killed because she spoke out against injustice, because she expressed her opinions and because she didn’t obey the rules.
2007-10-05 06:42:32 · 7 answers · asked by Lucy 2 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
I was in speech and debate during my high school years and have coached speech at the high school level.
Personally, I think that it is very good.
I'd totally go with it.
Best wishes on a great speech.
And remember speak slower that you think you should because many times in competition it comes out really too fast.
Mike
2007-10-05 06:57:58 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
It was ten minutes past five on the evening of the 7th of October 2006 in Central Moscow, when Journalist, Anna Politkovskaya entered the block where her apartment was located. Just 5 minutes later she was dead.
Great opening..... I'm interested and I don't even know who Anna Politkovskaya was!
Keep up the good work! Just remember to stick with either present or past tense and stay with it!
2007-10-05 13:58:42 · answer #2 · answered by Jeremy 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Sounds good
2007-10-05 13:55:55 · answer #3 · answered by gateach 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I like it--sounds like opening intro for a "Mike Hammer" mystery
2007-10-05 13:51:24 · answer #4 · answered by Mike 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Sounds good to me. I want to hear more and that is the test.
2007-10-05 14:13:17 · answer #5 · answered by DrIG 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I think it's great! I want to hear the rest of it.
2007-10-05 13:57:35 · answer #6 · answered by sandwest 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
It is really great i have one opinion when you are talking speak louder Keep it up!!!
2007-10-05 14:38:14 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋