well classes are changing now so bye everyone and by the way whats ur favorite color?
2007-10-05 06:20:09 · 15 answers · asked by Blake 5 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
No this is free time
2007-10-05 06:23:22 · update #1
I have no school today!
=)
Kay bye and I have two favorite colors,black and orange.
2007-10-05 06:23:57 · answer #1 · answered by heyitspreeti 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
LOL. I answered your other question about how do you know if writing is for you. I didn't read your writing when I answered that question and I didn't know that you had asked people to rate your writing. That last bit is important, because I answered the question thinking you asked for feedback and then people said you should stop writing. That's different than asking people to rate you 1-10 and then people saying you're a bad writer, lol. Now, I agree. This is a very poor piece. It's boring. You have a lot to learn when it comes to writing a good novel. Make sure you do lots of reading, because that's the best way to learn. Now, your character does have a strong voice, be it annoying, but it's there. That's a good step in the right direction. You have problems with your grammar. You can't become a writer if you're not good with grammar. You're having problems with your "persons." Are you writing in first person or third person? Work on your tense, too, and try to stick to just one. It's boring because I don't see a plot. I don't see any conflict. I don't care about the characters. And, I certainly dont see the point of the IM conversation. Remember this bit of advice when you're writing a story: everything you write has to reveal character (show the kind of person the character is) or move the plot forward. If it does neither of those things then delete it. Ask yourself how this IM conversation reveals who Hilary is or how it plays a role in the actual plot. If you can't figure out how then delete it, because it's insignificant, boring, and a waste of space. NEVER write anything just to fill up space. There should be significance to everything you write. Also, your IM conversation is confusing. Is her screen name Me or is it Hilary? Always be consistent when you write. This is a one. It's terrible, but that doesn't mean that you can't improve. I suggest you read as much as you can and pay attention to how the authors write their novels. Pay attention to how the authors build their scenes. Pay attention to how the authors develop their characters. Reading also helps with your grammar. Keep writing and reading and eventually it'll get better.
2016-05-17 04:40:52 · answer #2 · answered by ? 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Ok come back again bye i like purple blue pink purple yellow green black.
2007-10-05 07:13:13 · answer #3 · answered by donielle 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Buh bye!!!Have a nice day!!
Baby Blue!!
2007-10-05 06:24:17 · answer #4 · answered by ♥~Onyx~♥ 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Hey catch you later son, stay out of trouble. My favorite color is ''BLUE''.
2007-10-05 09:16:06 · answer #5 · answered by skunk 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Bye Bye
PINK! =)
2007-10-05 06:22:27 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
bye.
my favorite color is black. who cares if I'm emo. thats the way its gonna be.
2007-10-06 11:31:54 · answer #7 · answered by brittany 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Pink
and you are doing answers while you are in class?
2007-10-05 06:22:56 · answer #8 · answered by Smooch The Pooch 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
light pink.......bye have a good weekend
2007-10-05 06:22:48 · answer #9 · answered by ? 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Ok. Mwah. byebbye. xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
PINK/RED =D
2007-10-05 06:23:09 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋