Would you please help me to correct these sentences in English?

Question

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"What should a guide do when the tour group arrives at the hotel?
1.Help the tour group check in. After arrived at hotel,the tour leader or the national guide send out the room card. The local guide should know the room nembers of tour leader, national guide and the tourists,and tell his numbers to them either.
2.Inform the tour group of all facilities and services of the hotel,including local reastaurant and western reastaurant,entertainments,restrooms,clinic,etc.
3.Confirm arrangment for the first meal for the group.
4.Inform tour group of itinerary just for day of arrival and the next day,including the activities arrangement and when will we gather and where will we gather.
5.After the luggage are sent to the hotel,the guide should check the luggage and supervice them to carry the luggages to the tourists' rooms in time,
6.Arrange morning call for the tourists.

Answer 1

1. Help the tour group check in. After arriving at the hotel, the tour leader or the national guide sends out the room card. The local guide should know the room numbers of the tour leader, national guide, and the tourists, and tell his numbers to them also.
2. Inform the tour group of all facilities and services of the hotel, including the local restaurant and western restaurant, entertainment,

I don't know what the res.... is supposed to be.

3. Confirm the group's arrangements for the first meal.

4. Inform the tour group's itinerary for the day of arrival and the following day. Include the activities arrangements, when and where to meet.

5. After the luggage is sent to the hotel, the guid should check the luggage and supervise the luggage to the tourists rooms.

6. Arrange morning call for the tourists.

I reworded some of the sentences, because they were awkwardly phrased.
I hope this helps you. Sentence 2 was rather confusing on the last word res...
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Answer 2

"What should a guide do when the tour group arrives at the hotel?
1.Help the tour group check in. After arriving at the hotel the tour leader or the national guide should send out the room cards. The local guide should then know the room members, tour group leader, national guide and the tourists and tell his numbers to them all.
2. Inform the tour group of all facilities and services of the hotel, including local restaurants and western restaurants, entertaiments and restrooms..
3. Confirm the groups first meal arrangements.
4. Inform tour group of itinerary for the day of their arrival and next, including their activity arrangements and when an where they will gather.
5. After the luggage are sent into the hotel the guide should then check and supervise luggage as they are been carried up to the rooms in time.
6. Arrange a morning call for the tourists.

Answer 3

1. Help the tour group with check-in. After their arrival at the hotel, the tour leader or the national guide should send out the room card. The local guide should know the room numbers of the tour leader, the national guide, and the tourists. The local guide should also share his own number with the tour leader and the national guide.

2. Inform the tour group of the hotel's facilities and services, as well as local attractions, including local restaurants, Western restaurants, and entertainment.

3. Confirm arrangements for the first meal for the group.

4. Inform the tour group of the itinerary for the first two days, including the arranged activities as well as the gathering time and spot for the group.

5 After the luggage is sent to the hotel, the guide should check the luggage and supervise the hotel clerks as they carry the luggage to the tourists' room, making sure the luggage arrives in a timely manner.

6. Arrange a morning wake-up call for the tourists.

Answer 4

What should a guide do when the tour group arrives at the hotel?
1. Assist the tour group with checking in. Once all group members are checked in either the tour leader or the national guide to pass out the room cards. The local guide, tour leader, national guide and all other group members to be made aware of each others room contact details.
2. Inform the tour group of all facilities and services available at the hotel, including local and western restaurants, entertainment venues, etc...
3. Confirm arrangements for the first meal for the group.
4. Inform tour group of itinerary for that day and the next. Please make sure that all members are aware of meeting times and places.
5. When the tour groups luggage arrives at the hotel, the guide should assist hotel staff to ensure that each suitcase is delivered to its correct owner.
6.Arrange morning wake-up calls for the tourists.



OK.... I gave it my best shot. :)

Answer 5

1.Help the tour group check in. After arriving at the hotel,the tour leader or the national guide should hand out the room cards. The local guide should know the room numbers of the tour leader, national guide and tourists and give his room number [or contact numbers?] to them as well.
2.Inform the tour group of all the facilities and services at the hotel, including local and western restaurants, entertainment [got cut off because you didn't put in spaces].
3.Confirm arrangments for the first meal for the group.
4.Inform tour group of the itinerary for just the day of arrival and the next day, including the activities arranged and when and where to gather.
5.When the luggage arrives at the hotel, the guide should check the luggage and ensure that it is taken to the tourists' rooms in time,
6.Arrange for wake-up calls for the tourists.

Not 100% sure that's what you meant...note that "entertainment" and "luggage" are both non-countable.

Answer 6

"What should a guide do when the tour group arrives at the hotel?”

1. Help the tour group check in. After arrival at the hotel, the tour leader or the national guide should pass out the room cards. The local guide should know and distribute the room numbers for the tour leader, national guide, and the tourists.

2. Inform the tour group of all facilities and services of the hotel, including local restaurants, entertainment, etc.

3. Confirm arrangements for the first group meal.

4. Inform tour group of itinerary for day of arrival and the following day, including activities, and when and where to meet.

5. After the luggage is sent to the hotel, the guide should check the luggage and supervise prompt delivery to the appropriate rooms.

6. Arrange morning call for the tourists.

Answer 7

1. Help the tour group check in. After arrival at the hotel, the tour leader or the national guide will send out the room cards/keys. The local guide should know the room numbers for the tour leader, the national guide, and the tourists, and should his room number to them, as well.

2. Inform the tour group of all the hotel's facilities and services, including area restaurants and the various types of cuisine, entertainment, and other resources.

3. Confirm arrangment for the first meal for the group. (this one was good just as it was!)

4. Inform tour group of itinerary just for the day of arrival and the next day, including the activities arranged, and meeting times and locations.

5.After the luggage arrives at the hotel, the guide should check the luggage and supervise the movement of the luggage to the tourists' rooms in a timely manner.

6.Arrange wake-up calls for the tourists.


ADDED: Instead of "tourists", you could also refer to them as "tour members".

Answer 8

After arriving at the hotel, the tour leader or the national guide shall send out the room cards. The local guide should know the room number's of the tour leader, national guide and the tourists and inform all of them of these numbers.

2. is fine as it is

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4. Inform the tour group of the itinerary for the day of arrival and the following day, including arrangement and where and when we will meet.

5. Is fine as it is.

6. Arrange morning wake up call for the tourists.

It may also be a good idea to call them guests rather than tourists.

Your English is quite good far better than my Japanese.

Answer 9

your sentence is effective aside from one small undertaking. using the notice finished to describe works isn't splendid. finished could in basic terms technically be used to describe a single person, theory, place. So apart from some kinds of plurals you may not the full+ a plural notice. In stead say "for all the works.