I love you
Verse 1:
The tears start rollin' in
As I think about him again
I don't wanna loose what we could have
but it's a daydream
some thing's are as plain as
just him and me
And I wonder,
Will we ever be more than friends?
And I also,
Want to know, will he be there 'til the end?
Chorus:
I just can't let him go
My brain's goin' through so many memories
but yet so slow
Does he know he means so much to me?
Does he feel the same way?
I think his friends can, but he can't see,
that I love him more and more each day.
more and more each day
Verse 2:
It's a secret I could never tell,
It's something I've never felt
I guess it's something that's too hard to explain
Does he know?
That I write songs for him, I can't shout out his name?
Does he know?
That I love him,
Does he care?
I wanna be with him 'til the end.
Should I share,
my love
ohh, my love
[chorus]
Verse 3:
I pray to God at night
That he will end up mine
But I think I know the truth
the walls are crashing down
I just want to say,"I love you"
but something's holdin' me back
His friends say he loves me,
but I don't know who to believe.
[chorus]
I guess it's time,
to let the sun shine.
and say these words,
that I held back,
it's time you know the truth.
Yeah, yeah, I love you.
[chorus]
2007-10-03 04:09:22 · 12 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
I am only 11, by the way. I wrote this song in 20 minutes, I have posted this question ealrier today, but I want more answers. I am not doing this for compliments, I just want to see if I am good at this. Later on today, I am posting my other song,
"Your Forgiveness." I hope you guys enjoy my songs. Have a nice day and thank you for answering my question!♥
2007-10-03 04:12:49 · update #1
I am sorry, but what's so funny about this song? That I wrote it? What is it, because I will try and fix it...
2007-10-03 04:14:08 · update #2
I know many people, who DO NOT have a "bridge" in their songs, and the songs became best sellers. I think you should stop being so negative, no offense.
2007-10-03 04:15:41 · update #3
JSYK- There is NOTHING wrong with me, but what's wrong with you? Wait, I can answer that, you need grammar classes. I can see like 10 grammar mistakes in the like 5 words you put!
2007-10-03 04:18:43 · update #4
Sorry, but I write these songs for me. I sing them and all. I am in a band called K.G. Squared and you might just see us on T.V. or something someday. You never know.
2007-10-03 04:20:00 · update #5
Thank you!
2007-10-03 04:22:58 · update #6
It's kind of a country song. I am learning guitar, so as you know, the background music is gonna be with a tune based on a guitar....
2007-10-03 04:24:15 · update #7
katie this is the best song u hav evr writen!!!!
I love this song sooooo much I can't wait to get together and sing it wit u!!!!!!!
ur b.f.f
2007-10-03 08:19:51 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I really like it! I like the way the verses are not just saying the same old thing over and over again, you know? I find that so much in the music today. Your words mean something strong and true. I can feel your uncertainty, your anguish, your desire in your words. Let me know if you record it! :)
2007-10-03 11:14:47 · answer #2 · answered by Alisa C 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Where is the bridge????? Is it that 6 line thingy at the end? That is supposed to be 8 lines and in the middle.....ask Pete Townsend (he literally calls the bridge 'the 8 lines in the middle')
Frankly I hate whiny love songs, they pi*s me off, but if you go for that sort of thing it might be OK....just work on the bridge....only Pinball Wizard doesn't have one (that I know of....)
2007-10-03 11:13:58 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
Cute. The music could be some soft rock and roll but not mellow.
2007-10-03 11:21:31 · answer #4 · answered by Mario Vinny D 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
hey KayTay lol
Once agen cool lyrics. I'm 12 btw
Can u email me?
thx
apostolopoulosisabelle@yahoo.com
2007-10-03 11:39:37 · answer #5 · answered by noone 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That is so sweet.
i mean aww out loud!!! (aol) haha
I so think this is amazing, dont change a thing unless you have to!
I have so been there.
I hope that things work out!
<3 LOVE LOVE
2007-10-03 11:15:28 · answer #6 · answered by Bobby 2 · 2⤊ 0⤋
I think it's great! You should go to a studio and put it to music! Very talented!
2007-10-03 11:15:28 · answer #7 · answered by tazdvl_31 2 · 2⤊ 0⤋
NIce
2007-10-03 11:28:23 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
hey i like your song, it has a very point on how you feel about someone. keep writing more maybe i"ll be the one to sing them. good luck
2007-10-03 11:17:06 · answer #9 · answered by flowback master 2 · 1⤊ 1⤋
it seems ok wish i could hear the tune
2007-10-03 11:14:42 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋