How would you fix / reword this writing in English?

Question

About me:
I am 35. I am a self taught English student. I am from Korea. I used to work for a school as an office manager in Korea and work as a public administrative worker in Canada. I quit my job as my English is not strong enough to work. I feel it is getting better and better. I will apply for a job next year(08) or so. My ultimate goal in Canada is to work for school as Education is my secial ability, its exercise, and my special talent. Thus, I am attending several adult education centres to improve my second language skills and to enhance English computer skills. I have to make my goal come true for my happiness. Cheers !

I totally misunderstood... I mean I am interested in education field not teaching students... I should've posted that I would like to work for a school as an office administrative or similiar job. Thanks for all your help. I found my big mistake today.

I can't not modify or edit.. so I have to write again, haha.. I found a missing word: office administrative worker. May I say I can apply for a job in office supporting next year?

Answer 1

"I am a 35 year-old Korean lady, and have taught myself to speak English. I used to work for a school as an office manager in Korea, and now have a job as a public administration worker in Canada. I quit my job because my English is not strong enough to continue with it. However, I feel my language skills are getting better. Next year, 2008, I hope to apply for a job in the Canadian education system, either in office administration or as an administrative assistant since education has always been a special interest of mine. In the meantime, I have been attending several adult education centers to improve my second language skills and enhance my English computer skills. Making my goal come true is my biggest dream."


I spelled "centers" as they do in the US, so you can spell it either way. Also, I would not end it with "Cheers"

Answer 2

I am 35, a self taught English student from Korea. I used to work for a school as an office manager in Korea and now work as a public administrative worker in Canada. I quit my job as my English is not strong enough to work, however, I feel it is getting better and better. I will apply for a job next year (2008) or so. My ultimate goal in Canada is to work as a teacher as education is my special ability and my special talent. Thus, I am attending several adult education centers to improve my second language skills and to enhance English computer skills. I have to make my goal come true for my happiness. Cheers!

Answer 3

I am a 35-year-old self-taught English student from Korea. I used to work for a school as an office manager and then worked as a public administrative worker in Canada. I quit my job because I felt my English was not strong enough for me to work. I feel it is gradually increasing. I will apply for a job next year ('08). My ultimate goal in Canada is to work for a school as educating is my special talent. Therefore, I am attending several adult education centres to improve my English and to enhance my computer skills. In order to be happy, I must make my goal come true.
Cheers!

It all was fine and made sense (except "My ultimate goal in Canada is to work for school as Education is my secial ability, its exercise, and my special talent"), I just wrote it like I would have written it.

Answer 4

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