Blue essence, puriest form.
windows to your sole, gateway of warmth.
A love filled exchange, happiness for life.
A hope, a dream, a wish, my wife.
2007-09-30 13:53:51 · 6 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
Maybe she was disappointed with your spelling.
2007-09-30 13:57:27 · answer #1 · answered by the Boss 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
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2016-08-04 18:08:16 · answer #2 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
you probaly scared her with the last line. She probaly feels like your trying to propse to her and shes not ready for that step
2007-09-30 13:58:18 · answer #3 · answered by shermdizzly_72 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
way to early.and i dont like when guys write poems...its weird..girls job.And the wife part,EVERYONE knows not to!
2007-09-30 14:13:26 · answer #4 · answered by samantha_mora_13 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
the wife part may have overwhelmed her
2007-09-30 13:57:25 · answer #5 · answered by Brian is weird 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
she broke up because she couldn't understand it. Are you talking about her eyes or what?
2007-09-30 13:57:50 · answer #6 · answered by Gruntled Employee 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋