This is for a professional service company targeting other business professionals. My concern is that it's too cute.
2007-09-29 15:27:03 · 6 answers · asked by stonerosedesigndotcom 3 in Business & Finance ➔ Advertising & Marketing ➔ Other - Advertising & Marketing
I would label that tag-line as "cliche" before "cute". My guess is that you are trying to be "clever". The company's target market is business professionals. The way it sounds now is that your market is smarter than your tag-line. I hope this helps Good luck :)
2007-09-30 11:24:02 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
What is the name of your company? I think I understand what you're trying to convey, but the tag line is stupid unless the name of your company is "Our Claim to Fame" or something else famous.
2007-09-30 12:05:06 · answer #2 · answered by urbanminister 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Its cleverly cute, but is it going to generate response? my dollar says no way.
If the name of your company is a "benefit" oriented word..great!..however, your tagline is wasted when all it does is reiterate the same benefit.
2007-09-30 11:49:29 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It sounds vacuous. What's the name of the company?
2007-09-29 22:40:27 · answer #4 · answered by hottotrot1_usa 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Do you want to be known for your name or for your great service? Also the phrase fumbles the tongue.
2007-10-03 18:00:58 · answer #5 · answered by Luke B 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I love it, it is catchy and memorable! Definetly not too cute - very good bravo!
2007-09-29 23:33:02 · answer #6 · answered by reydi 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋