Could you correct my English grammar, please?

Question

I'm an American with Spanish blood. Mom made this Orkut for me to be closer to my family that is in Spain.
My mom had to move to the USA, because of your job, but she does everything for that I grew up knowing that my place is in Spain!!!

here in the USA, I'm model of a modeling Agency for kids, I take a lot of photos, therefore don't copy my photos, because the photos are with logo.

I want to make a lot friends Spanish friends!!!

Kisses!!!

Thanks in advance!!!

Answer 1

I'm an American with Spanish blood. Mom made this Orkut page for me to be closer to my family that is in Spain.
My mom had to move to the USA, because of her job, but she did everything for me. I grew up knowing my place was in Spain.

Here in the USA, I'm a model of a modeling Agency for kids. I take a lot of photos. Don't copy my photos, because the photos have logos.

I want to make a lot of Spanish friends!!!

Kisses!!!

Eh, the whole "I take a lot of photos so don't copy them because they have logos" thing doesn't make too much sense. Do you want them to avoid copying your pictures because they are copyrighted?
And it was a bit hard to understand what you wanted to say with your mom doing everything so you grew up knowing where your place was is a bit awkwardly phrased, too.

Answer 2

I'm an American with Spanish blood. Mom'S made this Orkut so that I be closer to my family in Spain.
My mom had to move to the USA, because of her job, but she does everything in order that I grow up knowing that my place is in Spain!!!

Here in the USA, I'm model of a modeling Agency for kids, I have a lot of photos, so please don't copy my photos, because the photos are marked.

I want to make a lot friends Spanish friends!!!

Answer 3

I'm an American with Spanish blood. Mom made this Orkut (page) for me to get closer to my family in Spain.
My mom had to move to the USA because of her job, but she does everything to make sure that I grow up knowing that my place is in Spain!!!
Here in the USA, I'm a model for a modelling agency for kids. I take a lot of photos, but please don't copy my photos because they are copyrighted.

I want to make a lot of Spanish friends!!!

Kisses!


I put "page" in brackets because I'm not sure if it really is needed or not. I personally would feel comfortable enough without the word "page" because I'd imagine an Orkut has more than one page, although I've never actually used Orkut before.

I wasn't quite sure what you meant by "My mom had to move to the USA, because of your job" - I assumed that you meant that your mom moved to the USA because SHE got a job, so I changed "your" to "her".

Also, I'm not quite sure why you "take photos" if you are a model. Taking photos is the job of the photographer. If you mean that they take photos of you, then it would be, "I am in a lot of photos". Like the first two answers, I assumed "with logo" to mean "copyrighted".

I posted this translation because I felt the other two used slightly clumsy English at some points, or English that could be misinterpreted. I therefore used the most natural English I could whilst sticking as closely to what you said as I possibly could.