does this sound okay for like a verse or two? it's called Best Friends Forever!
The lies you say
The words you speak
They hurt me more and more each day
Honesty would be nice now and then
But i see i'm not good enough for it yet
When will i be?
I'm tired of your crap
Tell Me Now
Is it too hard to tell me the truth
If It is i'll leave and never come back
It's not my fault i'm like this
I told you its hard being my friend
You're just not enough i guess
You said you could handle it
Mmm i guess not
And you call yourself my bestie
Gosh you're lies they sure can kill
Why do you think I'd rather be lied too
The truth is I don't care how bad the truth is
If its true i won't hate you
But itn's not true it never is
Because remember i'm not good enough for it
So i guess this is the end....
do you liek it? answers please
2007-09-28 19:51:59 · 10 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
ok this is about a guy he used to be my best frined but he promised to not lie to me an dhe lied a lot and hten told everyone these things about me that were not true, and yes i did like him alot. but not anymore
2007-09-28 20:00:00 · update #1
it's not too bad
2007-09-28 19:54:36 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's impossible to judge just from reading the lyrics. A good song needs to SOUND good, like with a good tune or melody and stuff. Lots of great songs have lyrics that don't seem like anything special if you just saw them written down. So I can't tell you if your song is good or not by reading the lyrics.
2007-09-28 20:06:41 · answer #2 · answered by egn18s 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it's good. is it written for a guy or girl? some advice would be to change some of the words that are often used in like every other song written. go to thesaurus.com for easy synonyms.
2007-09-28 19:56:35 · answer #3 · answered by Thats what she said 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Not bad for a poem, but not great for a song. Good try, though.
2007-09-28 19:55:20 · answer #4 · answered by The Nana of Nana's 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
No its not bad at all, but i suggest you look at other lyrics and notice small details like repetition and try to improve your work :)
2007-09-28 19:56:29 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It would be really nice for a poem but not a song. You have talent though :)
2007-09-28 21:15:01 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
sounds like a typical man-hater song. i hope you are a great singer, those lyrics are mediocre. the key to writing a song is "digging yourself out of a hole."
2007-09-28 19:59:03 · answer #7 · answered by Eryc 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it is more like a poem, but your on the right track, go back and try to sing it and and then go from there
2007-09-28 20:05:33 · answer #8 · answered by SIDECAR 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
the lyrics are good, but i can't really hear a flow . . .
2007-09-28 19:55:58 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
jeez are u n luv with the girl? wut gives?
2007-09-28 19:57:27 · answer #10 · answered by ? 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋