My Love for You
When I ‘am with you all I want to do is stare deep into your gorgeous eyes.
I want to surprise you everyday and put flowers on your bed.
I never want to hurt you or let you feel a hint of sadness.
The way I love you feels like an addiction that I can’t be cured of.
The second I see you my spirits lift to great heights.
Your voice is that of an Angel’s making me tremble.
It feels like you were a messenger of GOD to come and save me and bring me happiness.
My love for you goes beyond words.
No great poet of this age or any age can bring it to words.
The world stops spinning and even time itself stops for you and only you.
Our love is enough to make other people jealous but yet we do not flaunt it.
We keep it to ourselves and cherish it and hopefully with fate we will cherish it,
cherish it until our dying days. Some one wrote this for me but i think they lied, is this poem already written?
2007-09-28 18:32:35 · 3 answers · asked by nunu 1 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Philosophy
Just go with it. It doesn't matter as long as you're not trying to make money on it or take credit for it in class.
2007-10-02 16:53:10 · answer #1 · answered by M O R P H E U S 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
I've seen all those lines in some teenage love poem or another, whoever wrote it either copied it from the book of cliches aka poetry. com, or is just another crappy teenage poet, either way there in no semblance of originality in this poem.
...Devi
2007-09-29 02:05:02 · answer #2 · answered by Devi 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i've never seen it before....but then again...i dunno...I'll check up on it k?
2007-09-29 01:40:59 · answer #3 · answered by Miss Daye 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋