can you check if there's grammar mistake ?(English)?

Question

Hi, I'm making some questions to hand out after presentation.
I am from Korea, my English is not first language.
so Can you please check if there's grammar mistakes or the sentence that doesn't make sense ?

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Choose one out of four answer.

University require Secondary School ( 1 ) with ( 2 ) provincially examinable courses.

Most of programs require admission average of ( 3 ) %

Most of programs fees are between ( 4 ) ~ ( ). However, there are some programs that cost more than $9000. Find two of them (5)

6. Aaron has a Canadian citizenship. So he is not a international student.
7. University of Ottawa has much more expensive program fees than UBC, Toronto, Victoria, Waterloo, etc



Thank you ~~!!

Oh I give some options and choices for each questions. so it doesn't matter

Answer 1

I chose 6 & 7 because I do not understand what you want done with the first five (5) questions. They are improperly written and I do not know what you want done with 1, 2, 3, 4, or 5; sorry.

6. Aaron has a Canadian citizenship so he is not an international student.

7. The University of Ottawa's program fees are much more expensive than that of UBC, Toronto, Victoria, Waterloo, etc.

(Another example of #7 would be:

The University of Ottawa program fees are considerably more costly than UBC, Toronto, Victoria, or Waterloo.)

Hope these have helped.

Answer 2

I'm a bit confused too, but:

University require Secondary School ( 1 ) with ( 2 ) provincially examinable courses.

Either "Universities require" or "The university requires" a secondary school diploma.

Most of programs require admission average of ( 3 ) %

Most of THE programs require an average of (3)% for admission.

Most programs' fees are between ( 4 ) ~ ( ). However, there are some programs that cost more than $9000. Find two of them (5)

6. Aaron has Canadian citizenship so he is not an international student.

7. The University of Ottawa has much higher program fees than UBC, Toronto, Victoria, Waterloo, etc (I wouldn't include the etc.) Or UofO's programs are much more expensive. Fees aren't expensive, they're high.

Hope that helps!

Answer 3

Choose one of the four answers:

University requires secondary school (1 ) with ( 2 ) provincially examinable courses. (I'm not sure what you mean by this. Maybe it would be better to say it in a different way)

Most programs require an admission average of ( 3 ) %

Most of the program's fees are between ( 4 ) ~ ( ). However, there are some programs that cost more than $9000. Find two of them (5)

6. Aaron has a Canadian citizenship. So he is not an international student.
7. The fees at the University of Ottawa are much higher than at UBC, Toronto, Victoria, Waterloo, etc

Answer 4

Capitalize the information with on the commencing up of the letter. A comma desires to be extra after undertaking. a pair words ought to be switched around and convenience became spelled incorrect. it might appear like this: expensive Mr. ABC, with regard to the above stated undertaking, i might choose to request which you kindly carry mutually your grant letter from HR at your earliest convenience. thank you, (Your call) HR Officer

Answer 5

im not good at english either , but i found some :

1/University requires
6/So he is not an international student