what do you think of this sentence?

Question

I trust that we can use the knowledge of strong leaders from the past to set a good example.

is it too weak. Will you please help me think of a way to make it stronger and more clear. It's the beginning of a paragraph to end an essay.

Answer 1

You know the answer. Trust yourself then compose your letter again cutting out any words that are not necessary.

Answer 2

First of all when writing an essay, it is important to remember to avoid the use of ANY pronouns altogether (such as I, you, me, we, us, etc).

The topic sentence of a conclusion to an essay (which it seems is what you are writing) is especially important to let the reader know the conclusion's finality.

Using the names of the "strong leaders" would be a better and clearer approach to your topic sentence, or using some other relevant example.

One example for your sentence could be: "Using the knowledge of NAME will be of great use in setting an admirable example in future endeavours."

I hope this helps.

Answer 3

We look at the actions of the strong leaders of the past, to guide our decision-making for our future.

By following the guidance of the strong leaders of the past, we learn how to build a stronger future.

Answer 4

The wisdom and sagacity of strong leaders from the past goes continues to be a kindling force in our lives.

Gd luck!

Answer 5

It's imperative that we use the knowledge and experiance of our past leaders to guide us in the future.

Only by using the knowledge given to us by strong leaders of yesteryear can we follow the path of wisdom.