The title has to be stonger than my introduction. I want to see other people' s and compare them to my introduction and title. Your help is greatly appreciated.
2007-09-25 16:57:55 · 5 answers · asked by 80'sbaby 2 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
Cool Now; Devastation Later
2007-09-25 17:05:12 · answer #1 · answered by Louise M 1 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Title: Your Life - Going up the Chimney or down the Hatch?
Opening: How would you like to die? Lung cancer, cirrhosis of the liver, or as a special offer, a combination of both?
2007-09-25 22:15:11 · answer #2 · answered by A.V.R. 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Your opening sentance can be a fact, like some statistics on how many people die from smoking and drinking each year in your country =]
Good luck
2007-09-25 17:00:58 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Black Lungs and Cyrosis(SP?) of the Liver, Which do you choose ? = title, you will grab their attention or'
Slow death by suffering or life in the fullest ?
Because lung cancer death is like very slowly drowning in your own fluid in your lungs, it is horrible !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
2007-09-25 17:16:01 · answer #4 · answered by I Love Jesus 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Smoking & Drinking: Both can kill
2007-09-25 17:02:08 · answer #5 · answered by Ashley J 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋