wat would u think if ur bf gave u these 2 poems.
1st one
Countless people dream.
Countless people desire.
I don’t.
Not any more.
The things I dreamed and desired,
have come to be reality.
What more do I want than your smile,
that lights up my darkest days.
What more do I want than your embrace,
that warms and relieves up my troubled heart.
What more do I want than your love,
which is my reason to keep living.
I will spend the rest of my life with you,
Because nothing can compare to what I have now.
I love you
2nd one
Let me be your sun,
to illuminate your world
Let me watch over you,
with loving eyes
Magnetically drawn,
to revolve around each other
I will be,
the warmth and light in your life
And you,
Will be my world
2007-09-24 20:01:07 · 14 answers · asked by Amour 2 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
I would think "I'm the luckiest chick alive!". What beautiful poems! Your boyfriend must love you a lot! If I were you, I'd send him something like that back!
2007-09-24 20:12:11 · answer #1 · answered by PirateGal 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
If the rest of his behaviour matched the depth of sentiment in these poem, I'd say you hit the jack pot. He's a serious romantic. Try to return the depth of expression and write him a poem in return.
2007-09-24 20:06:08 · answer #2 · answered by alisongiggles 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
the 2nd one is kind of weird, but however the 1st one would creep the girl out since u said i love you. if you guys have dated for more than a year and this isnt the first time u or her dropped the L word. then the first one, but if not then the 2nd one.
2007-09-24 20:06:13 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
To be honest it would depend on how serious we were. If we had been dating a short time it would freak me out. Make sure your relationship is in the place where these would be appropriate. Not in the place she calls you a weirdo creep. Don't smother her......if you aren't in the place where these should be given.
2007-09-24 20:08:58 · answer #4 · answered by soulmate_n_nc 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Eh...it may pass the two techniques...in my opinion i think of its only strange while a guy cleans their footwear..to me it says that they do no longer want to get down and grimy if that is clever. yet i assume wonderful clothing could make a woman extra desirable to you, i in my opinion do no longer care. I concentration extra on character and whats interior no longer out. i'm hoping this facilitates a sprint....
2016-10-19 21:45:57 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think that the love you show in your poems makes a good woman and your already in love with her.
2007-09-24 20:05:58 · answer #6 · answered by Jennifer P 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That he obviously had some extra time on his hands and that he was telling me what i already know but still love to hear.
2007-09-24 20:06:18 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
any girl would be lucky to have received these poems from her boyfriend. Very sweet and touching!
2007-09-24 20:04:25 · answer #8 · answered by Star 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sounds serious. Hope you've been dating for a while and that you feel the same.
2007-09-24 20:05:09 · answer #9 · answered by mergirl 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
those are nice....if your a hopeless romantic...me on the otherhand if my old man gave me that poem i would expect his next line to rhyme with " im hay"....
2007-09-24 20:06:09 · answer #10 · answered by mekellygirl 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋