Lighting a Darkness
In the sky, clouds cover the sun.
Darkness arrives, light is on the run.
Shadows tear at enlightened hope,
Hearts begin to break, unable to cope.
Voices cry out for angelic love,
Smoke covers the white of the dove.
Just when blackness seems to win,
Prayer are heard, salvation begins.
2007-09-24 18:04:03 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous in Society & Culture ➔ Religion & Spirituality
Thanks..Your poem was very lovely.Hears a star to remember your poem.
2007-09-24 18:10:11 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
Enlightening
2007-09-25 01:15:21 · answer #2 · answered by the old dog 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
well, the rhythm is a bit off, but the couplets rhyme charmingly and the sentiment is pretty much true. Very much a reflection of modern times. Reminds me of the Valley of the Shadow of Death.
2007-09-25 01:09:44 · answer #3 · answered by Shinigami 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
When the last leaf is blown from my life's tree
will the wind be accused of killing me?
(or will it be your poem?)
2007-09-25 01:14:47 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
Very nice.
2007-09-25 01:08:07 · answer #5 · answered by gwhiz1052 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋