in my english class we have to write an autobipgraphy about something that is important that motivated you or was important to you in your life.So this is it:When I was about 7 years old, I fell in to a hole. It was behind Brown school when I was riding my bike around the school. It was around the afternoon when it happened. Nobody but me was in the field. What was happening was that I was all happy rushing to get home, not knowing that something was lying ahead of me. I was approaching the hole in the ground and I had no idea what lay ahead of me, because at the time I was all spaced out. So, I fell in to the hole and flipped over in the air and landed on my stomach. To me the experience was cool and I remember what happened everyday. The significance of the experience is basically to me that it kind of made a little more smart about not do to stupid things like that, also adventurous an in being to do more things like that without being scared.
Please tell me the truth about it
2007-09-23 10:49:48 · 4 answers · asked by Anonymous in Social Science ➔ Psychology
I might write about something else so these are it:
---the time I went out of the country to canada,seattle,and orgeon
---my experience with soccer
---Learning how to ride a bike.
---Having parakeets has pet
I think that's it so tell me which one you think is best.
2007-09-23 10:52:41 · update #1
The story about the hole is classic. You should definitely use this one; it's basically an analogy of how life is full of the unexpected. And, if you include how you got back on your bike after you fell, it will round the experience out nicely. Not only was it an example of life throwing you a curveball, but it shows that you learned to "get back on the horse".
Teachers eat that kind of thing for breakfast.
2007-09-23 11:01:11 · answer #1 · answered by Engaro 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think you should definitly go with the first one. If you remember all the details and just how you felt and how it affected you ( which it seems it had) you should do just fine with writing a story about it.
Good luck, and stay clear of those holes!
:)
2007-09-23 10:58:40 · answer #2 · answered by Sarah 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think your first thought was pretty good and it certainly seemed to affect your life. I think if you work at it, you could write a good story. Good luck!
2007-09-23 10:56:13 · answer #3 · answered by cavassi 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
go with falling in the ditch - it will be unique, not like what everybody else is writing. so the teacher won't get bored.
2007-09-23 10:57:23 · answer #4 · answered by nickipettis 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋