This is the monster under my bed;
He creeps out and wants to play.
He'll grab your ankles to pull you in;
Don't be frightened; he only wants you to stay
Because he likes you and he's lonely.
No one knows he's in there.
He makes his own fun,
No hide-and-seek or truth-or-dare.
He's had to create his own fun for far too long;
It's made a him such a shy boy.
You can help him oversome his skittishness.
Won't you give him a fun new toy?
He'll cease being so timid
Once you bring him out of his shell.
You may stay with him forever;
That's your secret; he won't tell.
2007-09-23 08:18:11 · 7 answers · asked by rebekkah hot as the sun 7 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
It took me about ten minutes.
2007-09-23 08:46:53 · update #1
Wow. cool. it's very... interesting. how long did it take you to make it up? it's pretty good
2007-09-23 08:25:48 · answer #1 · answered by gator_anj 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
wow,
10 minutes to create a poem
but I seem to recall afew months back
I was creating poems minutes apart
I like this poem here
because of what is under the bed
but I remember my being under the bed
that is reassuring a monster who wants to
play. At least I would not be scared of someone
who is friendly and want to play.
2007-09-23 17:02:49 · answer #2 · answered by sweet_blue 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
In my mind she hides to see
Curious if she's anything like me
She stalks my goodness and feeds off of my bad
She knows my weaknesses and leaves me sad
How long has she been hiding there?
Someone else is where?
I wonder how long she'll stay inside?
Oh yeah, she's me.. I lied.
2007-09-23 19:38:46 · answer #3 · answered by J C 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's always a breath of fresh air to see these kind of poems, it's freah, imaginative, and young outlook on life, good job.
2007-09-25 18:58:37 · answer #4 · answered by kissaled 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That was great. Become a poet and show it. Maybe you're the only good one.
2007-09-29 20:02:55 · answer #5 · answered by raptureready1217 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Great, I gave you a Star To.
2007-09-23 15:57:55 · answer #6 · answered by little sparrow 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
It was FANTASTIC! It blended together so well! Keep going!!!
2007-09-23 18:09:18 · answer #7 · answered by Bailey 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋