I wasn't planning to write a song but the words just kinda kept popping in my head so I just wrote it down real quickly, Tell my what you think. Im sure im probly gonna make some changes to it later.
The Lost Dream
Remember when you were young
Dreaming about the fire that burned inside of you
Whatever happened to the fire within you
Now all that remains
Is a cold desolate dessert
Open up your mind
Think about the things you’ve never thought
What would this life be like
If we could just see the other side
Expand your mind
Look at the horizon
Theirs no limit to what can be accomplished
I think the time has come
To reignite the thermite
That once engraved a dream within side of me
Why is it we never live till were ready to die!!!
2007-09-22 15:17:31 · 12 answers · asked by nick 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music ➔ Rock and Pop
Change:Look at the horizon
To: Look beyond the horizon
Change:Theirs no limit to what can be accomplished
To:There is no limit to what can be accomplished
Change:That once engraved a dream within side of me
To:That once engraved a dream within me
2007-09-22 15:25:34 · answer #1 · answered by juniorramos1974 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
David Bowie's track female Stardust (on the the upward push And Fall Of Ziggy Stardust And The Spiders From Mars LP) It become written for and approximately Marc Bolan. this is often been one among my well-known Bowie songs - the lyrics, the ambience conjured right now with the aid of the 1st guitar chord, the entire shape of the factor, i won't be in a position to quite quantify it, yet i've got constantly enjoyed it.
2016-11-06 03:17:02 · answer #2 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Remeber when you were young?
You'd shout like the sun...
Shine on you crazy diamond!!!!
Change the first line/paraphrase it or it'll remind everyone of Pink Floyd's Shine On You Crazy Diamond
2007-09-22 15:23:35 · answer #3 · answered by meep meep 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
WOOAH.
i really really like that! the fire reminds me of When It Rains by Paramore.
2007-09-22 15:22:03 · answer #4 · answered by ;) 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
cool! you have talent, because i could never just sit down and write a song lol
2007-09-22 15:22:03 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
time to steal the song
yours in rock,
janis joplin
2007-09-22 15:30:08 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
wow that's awesome. Tell me when you releace your album and I'll buy it.lol
2007-09-22 16:26:53 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
i think its wonderful and awesome! i think your a good composer for sure you will get a job that is composing.
2007-09-22 15:30:30 · answer #8 · answered by poohfanatic 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its different but good
2007-09-22 15:25:09 · answer #9 · answered by crazy0122003 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
love it. put some screamo in it.
2007-09-22 15:23:50 · answer #10 · answered by thatkidoverthere 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋